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Two Drops of Water

Two drops of water fell from heaven Unlike any other, they were in love Holding each other they stayed together Dreaming of river and deep blue ocean. It wasn't easy to skip the flower-garden And ignore appeal of a thirsty fountain, But they persevered rushing down street Being trampled by traffic and splashy feet. Bouncing, giggling, reaching tributaries Riding gleefully, foaming, and sprinkling Jumping in delight, riding wavy vibes Sensing river was near, rushing with joy. Panic set in when they got separated Holding essence of a shattering dream. Feeling like being abandoned midstream One drop teared, the other saw cheer. Drop that teared soon learned to cope But as the ocean neared, it lost all hope. Little did it know as it fell into the ocean Other drop waited to catch it with elation. March 4, 2018

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Date: 4/14/2023 4:35:00 AM
This is an amazing journey of two rain drops together. It has the element of adventure, elation and heartbreak of a love relationship. Greatly enjoyed this tale.
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Date: 11/29/2018 11:38:00 AM
Hi Vijay, you have such a wonderful way with words and an excellent imagination. You had me from start to finish in this excellent write. I loved the content. I would never have guessed that I could be spellbound by the story of two dropas of mind. This all comes down to the poet and his creative skill. I love the content. A fave. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 4/4/2018 9:10:00 AM
Friend, your poem touched the depths of my heart. So nice words. Thank you for this lovely poem :)
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Date: 3/25/2018 5:59:00 PM
OH MY! You made me want to step in and help. You could make this a lovely Children's book. Honestly! The friendship and adventure of the two drops...,so charming.The lesson of never giving up when feel abandoned . courage of going on...and the reward. OH MY...I"ll wait for book ..GREAT write Vijay I want first copy!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 7:54:00 AM
You are wonderfully supportive..many thanks Barbara.
Date: 3/7/2018 3:03:00 PM
what a lovely story you told with this poem. VERY creative, Vijay!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 3/7/2018 2:00:00 PM
A beautiful poem which highlights the benefits of hope and perseverance. This was a roller coaster ride...down...up...down... Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/7/2018 2:42:00 PM
Thank you Paul.
Date: 3/6/2018 1:21:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2018 6:34:00 AM
Thank you Ravi..appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/5/2018 2:03:00 PM
Loved that first line, the poem read very well, you are a great word weaver Vijay...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2018 5:09:00 PM
Thank Silent One for your kind feedback.
Date: 3/5/2018 1:37:00 PM
Cool creative poem, Vijay. This message of hope was very inspiring. Your creative mind knows no bound. Great allegory, great story. Love and joy always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Freddie..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 3/5/2018 1:37:00 PM
Cool creative poem, Vijay. This message of hope was very inspiring. Your creative mind knows no bound. Great allegory, great story. Love and joy always.
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Date: 3/5/2018 9:34:00 AM
Very good...A little gem...I like the magic you worded in your poem...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Arturo..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 3/5/2018 8:12:00 AM
A wonderful happy ending, Vijay and a love poem of hope. I really enjoyed it, Happy Monday !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2018 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Mike--always appreciate your feedback.
Date: 3/5/2018 1:40:00 AM
- A wonderful written poem, Vijay - Enjoy reading - Best wishes for a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2018 6:08:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise..appreciate the kind words.
Date: 3/4/2018 6:16:00 PM
What a metaphor of love you have written!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2018 7:02:00 PM
Thank you SW.. I’m happy to read your kind words. Appreciate your visit.
Date: 3/4/2018 5:28:00 PM
Personified raindrops, poetry doesn't get much better than this..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2018 7:01:00 PM
Thank you harry.. always happy to read your kind feedback.
Date: 3/4/2018 5:23:00 PM
Beautifully penned and i loved the ending vijay:-) hugs Jan xx a
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2018 7:00:00 PM
Thank you Jan.. appreciate your visit and kind words.
Date: 3/4/2018 4:57:00 PM
Rally like the this one Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2018 6:59:00 PM
Thank you Carlos.. delighted by your visit and comments.
Date: 3/4/2018 4:56:00 PM
Wow amazing poem Vijay! I love how you wrote this and a great ending :) A favorite
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/4/2018 6:58:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.. always happy to read your kind words.

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