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Two Cities

Atop a hill of ice and snow There sits two cities built long ago One of black, an ominous place The other of gold and captivating grace People journey from near and far To see a view entirely without par A castle of obsidion, made to last And an elegant town, of light and glass Rarely appearing to those that seek Caring not if they are strong or weak But if you travel in the frozen waste You may find yourself eventually faced With a view on which few mortals have layed eye Majestic beauty under the endless blue sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/5/2015 10:12:00 AM
Nice write Zachary, very descriptive.
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Date: 12/5/2015 12:21:00 AM
Wonderful poem and win Zachary ... big congrats!
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:49:00 PM
Zachary, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:07:00 PM
Zachary, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/18/2015 9:09:00 AM
congratulations on having your poem featured on the home page :) the imagery in this write is astounding. really good write :D
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Date: 11/17/2015 10:15:00 PM
Zachary:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 11/16/2015 9:47:00 AM
Outstanding vision - relates to life. Congrats. daver
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Date: 11/8/2015 3:18:00 PM
Wonderful write you take me away--Excellent 7+++ -----DO look me up let me know what you think
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Date: 11/8/2015 1:02:00 PM
Hi Zachary, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/7/2015 2:38:00 PM
Zachary, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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