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Two Boys Went Fishing - Bawdy

Two boys were fishing when they met a willing broad The first boy quickly extended his fishing rod And so, when he was done She saw the other one Who had already caught his allotment of cod. written July 21, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/23/2021 6:48:00 PM

I am not old enough to read this one; I am shocked I am racy enough to understand it.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/23/2021 7:52:00 PM

Sorry...didn't mean to insult your sensibilities. Well, I know Jan liked it!

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/22/2021 11:58:00 AM

Too funny Milton and love the double entendre !

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/22/2021 12:20:00 PM

Thanks, Mike. "hubby?" Did you mean "funny?" My fingers sometimes slip like that, too. Again, thanks for your comments on my poem.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2021 10:41:00 AM

ha ha ha , I find the rhyming of broad with cod and rod doesn't work to 'british ear' but nevertheless it is such a funny poem :-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/22/2021 11:22:00 AM

Thanks, Jan. I don't know how you would say those words differently. Does broad rhyme with "road?"