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Two Beating Hearts Ravening In the Night

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At the end of evening twilight, into a cool breeze of briny scent, down the bent weathered wooden steps Away from the dew kissed grass, next to a universe of sand, driftwood, seashells, and seaweeds. The sea breathes deep and ebbs into its depth into an obsidian gold glimmer sheen With the sounds of breaking waves breathes out proudly braves , crawling on its belly upon the shore. The horizon meets the sea as two beating hearts ravening in the night, as they whisper infinite conversation in the gradient night. The life of the night radiating romance, celestial dome empowering dance, as Heaven mirth gazes upon the earth 6/22/2016

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Date: 7/14/2016 9:28:00 PM
Excellent imagery, Eve! A lovely write! Congrats on your placement in the contest!
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Date: 7/14/2016 3:13:00 PM
The imagery of your piece really tempted me to live in your world in my thoughts forever!! Congrats Eve, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/23/2016 8:56:00 AM
amazing image and imagery Eve a delight to read today:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/22/2016 9:04:00 PM
Excellently done two Beating Hearts ravening In the night for their love dance. A 7. Loved always my smiling friend, bl
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