Twisting the Night Away

She thought her new job would be stressful
hearing third shift would be dreadful
at first she was slow
bending the dough
twisting all night to make perfect pretzels.



9-27-17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hauser  Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 8:07 PM
Nice!
Hoffman Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:28 AM
Thanks so much for very short kind comment and visit Mike!~Che :)
Adams Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 8:22 AM
A pretzel maker? Cool. Who thinks of stuff like this. Cheryl, of course. Good one!....................Pat
Hoffman Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; appreciate it!~Che :)
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