Twisted Plots

She found a hero in the book's shadowy schemes,
 The detective who could enter the realm of dreams
 She turned the pages of her imagination
 As the book's surreal plot unfolded

 It was in this dreamlike dimension
 The fiend would be found,
 In slumber his dreams would give him away
 And her hero would be crowned

 Then the plot took another twist
 And her conclusions became hazy
 She realized her assumptions were unreal
 The lines became blurred in this imaginary zone

 She finally reached the last chapter
 in this twisted ethereal tale,
 She stared at the book in a trancelike state;
 Her hero was the villain she had come to hate!

 5-28-2021
 Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 7/4/2021 10:04:00 AM
Such a clever poem my friend, I love your last line, so unrealistically realistic. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/27/2021 5:21:00 PM
you wove the words in brilliantly Joseph, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/24/2021 5:09:00 PM
oh I love books and movies with twists and it's super great when there is a twist upon a twist. I see this is a winner. Big congrats.
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Date: 6/11/2021 2:07:00 AM
sure is a poem with a twist. Congratulation, an enjoyable read.
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Date: 6/9/2021 12:04:00 PM
oh, I see it was a winner - congrats, my friend
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Date: 6/9/2021 12:03:00 PM
a lovely take on the theme & a sure winner, I'd say
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Date: 6/2/2021 3:21:00 PM
Joseph, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, peace _Constance
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:10:00 PM
A Unique Writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/1/2021 8:29:00 PM
"Her hero was the villain she had come to hate!" Oh my ! It certainly happens all the time. This is enchanting and shocking, all at the same time. I wish to place this in my favorites. Because. You have created a masterpiece, my sweet friend. :) Brandy
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Date: 6/1/2021 3:35:00 PM
Wow, well done with those words Joseph and the creative twist. :)
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Date: 5/29/2021 4:27:00 PM
Hi Joseph: Love your twisted plot. The words fit in seamlessly. Good Luck in the Contest. (Soup mail) SuZ
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Date: 5/29/2021 10:45:00 AM
Very well composed novel poem, Joseph! All the best in your contest.
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Date: 5/29/2021 6:26:00 AM
Now that must be quite the tale, Joseph, a unique take on the contest, and I love it absolutely:)
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Date: 5/29/2021 4:19:00 AM
Totally dreamlike, Joseph. I can see why the turn in ending like would put her in a trancelike state. Cleverly done.
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Date: 5/28/2021 11:21:00 PM
Very imaginative, Joseph. I agree about your last sentence. Forceful. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/28/2021 7:47:00 PM
Exceptional write, Joseph. The last line is unforgettable. Best wishes in the contest. Wow!
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Date: 5/28/2021 7:05:00 PM
WoW! Joseph, I like what you up using the chosen words. It had a nice flow and rhythm. I found your story so engaging as well. Very clever, having the character reading a book. It looks like a winner to me. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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