Twisted Plots

She found a hero in the book's shadowy schemes,
 The detective who could enter the realm of dreams
 She turned the pages of her imagination
 As the book's surreal plot unfolded

 It was in this dreamlike dimension
 The fiend would be found,
 In slumber his dreams would give him away
 And her hero would be crowned

 Then the plot took another twist
 And her conclusions became hazy
 She realized her assumptions were unreal
 The lines became blurred in this imaginary zone

 She finally reached the last chapter
 in this twisted ethereal tale,
 She stared at the book in a trancelike state;
 Her hero was the villain she had come to hate!

 5-28-2021
 Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Constance La France
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Proxenos Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Such a clever poem my friend, I love your last line, so unrealistically realistic. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 5:21 PM
you wove the words in brilliantly Joseph, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 5:09 PM
oh I love books and movies with twists and it's super great when there is a twist upon a twist. I see this is a winner. Big congrats.
Horsman Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 2:07 AM
sure is a poem with a twist. Congratulation, an enjoyable read.
Horne Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 12:04 PM
oh, I see it was a winner - congrats, my friend
Horne Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 12:03 PM
a lovely take on the theme & a sure winner, I'd say
La France Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 3:21 PM
Joseph, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, peace _Constance
Alex Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:10 PM
A Unique Writing. Congratulations!
Nicole Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 8:29 PM
"Her hero was the villain she had come to hate!" Oh my ! It certainly happens all the time. This is enchanting and shocking, all at the same time. I wish to place this in my favorites. Because. You have created a masterpiece, my sweet friend. :) Brandy
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Wow, well done with those words Joseph and the creative twist. :)
Delaney Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Hi Joseph: Love your twisted plot. The words fit in seamlessly. Good Luck in the Contest. (Soup mail) SuZ
Shariff Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 10:45 AM
Very well composed novel poem, Joseph! All the best in your contest.
Daniel Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 6:26 AM
Now that must be quite the tale, Joseph, a unique take on the contest, and I love it absolutely:)
Pandit Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 4:19 AM
Totally dreamlike, Joseph. I can see why the turn in ending like would put her in a trancelike state. Cleverly done.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 11:21 PM
Very imaginative, Joseph. I agree about your last sentence. Forceful. Best for a win.
Hankins Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 7:47 PM
Exceptional write, Joseph. The last line is unforgettable. Best wishes in the contest. Wow!
Y. Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 7:05 PM
WoW! Joseph, I like what you up using the chosen words. It had a nice flow and rhythm. I found your story so engaging as well. Very clever, having the character reading a book. It looks like a winner to me. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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