Twinkle Twinkling Lights

Twinkle twinkling lights beyond beyond my house. . . out to where the mountains meet low and blackened clouds. Twilight time in January all is bathed in gray. No rainbowed hues dance hither to tag this winter's day. Out to where the lights across the valley towns are a myriad of fireflies that flicker flicker round . . . their circle ever grows as evenfall grows thicker. People settle in. The temperature will drop. Night . . . and soon more lightning bugs will join in the throng, absorbing all the warmth of all the others' twinkle twinkling lights. (The city of Pleasant Grove and surrounding Utah Valley cities in January from twilight to night.) For Deb's Contest: City Lights Poetry Contest
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Davis Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 11:21 PM
Andrea What a wonderful and descriptive write about this marvelous place. My mind is picturing this awesome scenery as I'm reading. Thank you for the great comment on my Colours poem
Kendrick Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 10:37 AM
I found one that I had not read..Good job here..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara
Minardi Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 8:24 PM
this is wonderful. I can never write poem describing scene like this... 'the perfect story wrapped in blue' is just a fiction thankfully :) hugs, dinda
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Debbie's "City Lights" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 10:25 PM
Really sounds nice Andrea. A very nice descriptions. Congratulations
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Andrea. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Susan Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 5:52 PM
Nice imagery. sounds like a lovely place to live or visit. good luck in the contest :)
Maverick Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 3:29 PM
Like the pleasant description Andrea,, would be nice to see it close up..)
Horsman Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 3:26 PM
you make it sound so inviting, i'm going over there on my google earth to take a look. enjoyed this. soup mail harry
Phookan Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 2:36 PM
Hey Andrea!Thanks dear and how are you sweetheart? and how beautiful you write, you make me want to come back and write some,, lovely lines here!! we have them fireflies here too on all the damp green darkness at nightfall.....so wishing you all the best, love you
Austin Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Oooowwww, I like the warmth of this scene, a town gradually coming to night life. The lightning bugs is a great image. Love, daver
Smith Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 6:29 AM
I ate a Twinkie and read your 'Twinkle Twinkling Lights'. Delightful; so's your poem. Old joke: How did the firefly feel when he backed into the fan?...Delighted! Ha, ha. Polyptoton; Shakespeare loved it.
Williams Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 3:34 AM
sounds quite exhilerating, good luck.. David
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January 14, 2012 at 2:10 AM
oww, so lovely. it reminded me of a childhood memory Andrea.
Onclaud Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 6:29 PM
how fancy free and delightful, andie.. the reptitive lines make this piece twinkle... whoot! :) huggs!
Sivey Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Oh wow Andrea, you have written another one again...A special and fantastic write beyond the the norm(that's good)! I love the lights, and of course the fireflies, "...that flicker flicker round..." great use of these words Andrea! I can imagine exactly what you see at twilight and beyond to night! Very visual poem!! Awesome Work!!
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January 13, 2012 at 8:34 AM
an amazing picture in brilliant star studded words describing a grand place Andrea.. good form for contest. don't know yet but maybe will do Italy.. my Wise Prize if for Joe's and Brian's contest.. so happy u go computer working again.. my photo has to be cropped in my pictures before I can download an Avatar for me.. no one here seems to know how to so waiting for my son to call me and walk me thru Nikko's great directions.. coming soon.. happy weekend..luv.
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January 13, 2012 at 7:27 AM
You have virtually taken the reader to Pleasant Grove.Very creative.Repetition of words BEYOND and FLICKER brought extra effect in this poem.Very nice.Best wishes in the contest Andrea.
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January 13, 2012 at 2:27 AM
very nice , like this Andrea even though I am not a fan of free verse. x
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January 13, 2012 at 1:12 AM
By the way, I enjoyed your Twinkle Twinkling Lights - great write! Maureen :)
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January 13, 2012 at 1:11 AM
Andrea, My website won't be up until the end of next week. It certainly wasn't the X rated one. I had to laugh. Hope you sleep well. Nite nite, Maureen :)
Davis Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 12:24 AM
A warming, mellow write....just what the doctor ordered for a damp winter moning's commute ;-)
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January 12, 2012 at 11:21 PM
Absolutely lovely beautiful words Andrea, Love, Brenda : )
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January 12, 2012 at 11:06 PM
I can't wait for the summer to see those nocturnal insects. Andrea, the word "lightning" is spelled without an "e". Good write.
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