Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

Early riser, coffee in my hand
Watching the stars as they fade away
Yes, twinkle twinkle little star
Go, I'll admire you another day

Your light has come so very far
From a different time and place
A distance I cannot comprehend
Through this mystery called space

When I break this earthly bond
Perhaps the heavens I'll explore
Flying to see you face to face
And walk through infinity's door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 5/13/2015 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your nice win in the contest, Barbara. I like the infinity message in your twinkle poem very much! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/11/2015 10:41:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Barbara
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:59:00 PM
Barbara, I like how this simple rhyme was rather profound at the same time, and I see this got a win. BIG congrats to you. Well done.
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Date: 5/9/2015 8:02:00 PM
Aweeee.... Nice PD
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:42:00 PM
Barbara, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 5/9/2015 1:17:00 PM
I enjoyed this charming poem, Barbara. Very creative and nicely written! Congrats on a win!
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Date: 5/9/2015 3:32:00 AM
Space is amazing; stars moreso. Oh to be able to travel throughout space and get to know each one. Beautifully done.
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Date: 5/2/2015 10:58:00 AM
Yes. A child's version of the old jingle - a grown child at that. I love it when a person can become child like in his/her poetry. Love, daver
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Date: 4/27/2015 12:20:00 PM
Ah, if only we could master time travel. I do believe it's possible based on some theories scientists describe regarding worm holes. Hold my hand, BG, and let's go back to childhood when all things seemed possible. Love this write. Big 7+ Hugs to my fellow LNC, Carolyn
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