Jean Murray Poet Rhyme

Twin Peaks

I cannot think of mountains
without thinking of mine.
And how nice they are to climb.

Perched on the top
the view is sublime
of that valley of mine.

The Twin Peaks I call them.
Sharp summits on top.
Hold on...don't stop.

So smooth are the sides.
If you let go you might slide
down into that valley.

So lush and overgrown
you might never get home.
Forever lost and alone.

11/07/2016

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Arthur Vaso July 15, 2016 at 9:48 AM oh la la Jean, I like I like! :) sent you a soup mail! Jean Murray July 15, 2016 at 11:57 AM Must check it out Arthur.

Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2016 at 5:21 PM seems like a sexy nature poem there. Very cool!! Jean Murray July 13, 2016 at 6:20 PM I am very attached to my twin peaks Andrea.

Just James July 12, 2016 at 1:03 AM Jean, you have a reputation!.....but I did enjoy your twin peaks! Jean Murray July 12, 2016 at 2:01 AM My reputation, like my twin peaks, goes before me James.

Viv Wigley July 11, 2016 at 11:29 PM I detect a twinkle in your eye, Jean. And the accompanying image is slightly erotic. Hee hee..... Viv x Jean Murray July 12, 2016 at 2:07 AM Only slightly?? It need adjusting then Viv.

Jan Allison July 11, 2016 at 11:36 AM OMG great minds think alike ... Jean I changed the title of my poem today from 'Twin peaks' to mountains lol if you look at my limerick you will see we are on the same theme but I wouldn't ever enter mine in the contest - good on you for being brave and going with this theme lol:-) hugs jan xx Jean Murray July 11, 2016 at 11:47 AM But why not enter Jan? Would the person be so offended as to require smelling salts to recover? The worst that can happen is a N/A, and I am well used to those now. Must look at your mountains now.

Daniel Turner July 11, 2016 at 8:45 AM Great metaphor Jean. I love mountains and valleys. lol Jean Murray July 11, 2016 at 9:09 AM Honestly Daniel, every time I went down through the Contests list, when I passed this one, I couldn't think of anything else.