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Twin Flames

Ebullient flames dancing with ineffable measure under night's quiet penumbra
	A union of flamingo necks wound together by an eternally bound conundrum
		Their fires roar soft as they tenaciously whisper life into each others' capture
			To lose one light would darken the iridescent symphony of ever-loving rapture

Their bodies scorch as two breaths of silk filament coalesced in tight embrace
	Their unity arouses somber thoughts and infuses them with epiphany and grace	
		Forever lit by the succulent air they consume and the decadent light they exude
			They endlessly blaze love's eternal sketch as twin hearts unable to be subdued


March 8, 2016

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Skat A Date: 3/19/2016 12:56:00 AM Sam, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT** Login to Reply Sam Jameson Date: 3/20/2016 2:18:00 PM Why thank you, SKAT :) good to see your name back up on the boards-- appreciate your kind remark.

Teddy Kimathi Date: 3/16/2016 8:19:00 AM Hi Sam. Congrats for your placement in this contest, with your wonderful couplet. ;-) I admire their speed- boat shapes.... Login to Reply Sam Jameson Date: 3/16/2016 12:02:00 PM Why thank you, Teddy-- wasn't necessarily going for that 'powerboat look' but I'm def glad it gives you a reminder of something pretty cool ;) Thanks for the kind words, glad you enjoyed the read. Have a good one!

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/15/2016 9:06:00 AM Hi Sam, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. This is a most absorbing write, well crafted. I did enjoy this read Sam. It is a definite seven my friend....Vlad. Login to Reply Sam Jameson Date: 3/15/2016 12:34:00 PM Thank you for the kind feedback, Vlad-- I'm thrilled that the words connected well with you. I enjoy when the reader can feel something during the read, even if just for a fleeting moment or two. Thanks for the kind words my friend-- enjoy your day.

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/13/2016 9:03:00 PM Looks like you got high placement in yet another contest, Sam! This is quite a different poem than Everyday Actors ... wonderful use of language like the entwining flamingo necks. Deserved win, I should say. Login to Reply Sam Jameson Date: 3/13/2016 10:32:00 PM Just a tad different ;) -- I love these contests as they push for such difference in the angles and styles, a great avenue for creativity and learning. Thanks for the kind remarks my friend, they are much appreciated. Enjoy your night!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 3/13/2016 2:49:00 PM Congratulations Sam on the placement of the contest Login to Reply Sam Jameson Date: 3/13/2016 3:45:00 PM A fantastic surprise, Nayda! Thank you for sponsoring the contest-- I enjoy creating and competing in your contests and I'm thrilled with the placement. I did not have any expectations with this work so this result is a wonderful bonus. Glad you enjoyed, thanks again :)

Charlie Smith Date: 3/13/2016 2:28:00 PM Great work, Great win Sam, congratulations Login to Reply Sam Jameson Date: 3/13/2016 3:41:00 PM Many thanks, Charlie-- I'm glad you enjoyed the work..I appreciate your supportive words.

Constance La France Date: 3/11/2016 5:48:00 PM Sam, your write is absolutely BEAUTIFUL , a winner for sure and I am loving it 7 ~ Login to Reply Sam Jameson Date: 3/11/2016 6:01:00 PM Oh we'll see-- I wasn't thrilled with this piece after I put it up but I try and leave up every bit even if I'm not totally happy with it. Thank you though for the kind praise with your words Constance-- I really appreciate the visit. Have a wonderful night :)