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Twilight's Eruption

twilight's eruption

in skies of tangerine . . . 
 
samurai shadows

sunsethaiku

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Line Gauthier

April 17, 2018 at 6:28 PM

Lovely, Andrea. A beauty.

Janice Canerdy

June 8, 2017 at 3:44 PM

Lovey haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win. Janice

John Lawless

June 8, 2017 at 3:09 PM

Love this one.....

Moon Flower

June 7, 2017 at 1:03 AM

Such a cool imagery you used here, Andrea. A breathtaking piece. Congrats! ;)

Vladislav Raven

February 16, 2016 at 8:23 PM

Hi Andrea, i do Love Haiku. I like them much more when they are well written and have style. As your Haiku is an excellent piece it ticks all the boxes. A seven and into my faves it goes Andrea. BRAVO!!!! A belated congratulations to you on the win Andrea....Vlad.

Jan Allison

February 11, 2016 at 11:50 AM

Fabuloussssssssssssss win my friend:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless

February 10, 2016 at 1:31 PM

stealthily seizing the top spot......Bravo!!

Paul Callus

February 10, 2016 at 12:56 PM

This is excellent, Andrea! Somehow I missed reading this one before; I also was thinking on Japanese lines, but diverted my attention to city smog! Congratulations on a merited first place! // paul

Sandra Haight

February 10, 2016 at 8:20 AM

Very nice, Andrea. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 10, 2016 at 4:07 AM

Oh wow Andrea amazing haiku dear... congrats on top podium!!

Judy Konos

February 10, 2016 at 3:17 AM

Andrea Dietrich...You are so "KQQL"

Poet Destroyer A

February 10, 2016 at 12:09 AM

Andrea, Congrats on your "Haiku 101" win. LINDA

Susan Gentry

February 9, 2016 at 11:44 PM

I love this! Excellent haiku. Congratulations on win! A 7

Connie Marcum Wong

February 9, 2016 at 11:05 PM

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! I loved this one Andrea. So happy to see it in the top spot! #7

Nathan D.

February 9, 2016 at 9:04 PM

nice

Timothy Hicks

February 7, 2016 at 4:40 PM

OOoh I love this one! The language is so fresh ... tangerine sky, samurai shadows. And you've a tipped a hat to the Japanese tradition by taking about samurais!

Thomas Martin

February 4, 2016 at 2:01 PM

Almos never read haiku here at soup, but you did very well!

Scott Thirtyseven

February 4, 2016 at 8:20 AM

Best of luck in the contest.

James Inman

February 3, 2016 at 9:19 PM

Nice Andrea.

Daver Austin

February 3, 2016 at 1:08 PM

Delicious and exotic with Japanese flavor. Love those shadows. My book is nearly finished, then I can get caught up. Love daver

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 3, 2016 at 8:33 AM

WoW! Marvelous dear Andrea!

Sara Kendrick

February 2, 2016 at 4:07 PM

Reads like a winner..Very descriptive of the picture that we are suppose to use for the entry..I enjoyed reading it.Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara