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Twilight Tapestry

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Sunlight's golden threads were woven among cyan silk waves of a quiet sea. A lovely tapestry interlaced with pastels at twilight as soft shimmering shades mingled their colors to fascinate me. Tangerine cheeks of a dusky sky blushed in peach when the sun winked at the rising moon's glowing beauty. It was quite a flirtatious scene, I think, when observed with a romantic eye.

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/14/2023 4:04:00 PM

Lin the artist who painted the picture would be sure to love this poem you wrote ‘Twilight Tapestry’ is beautiful… Belle

Lin Lane
Date: 5/14/2023 4:40:00 PM

Thanks so much, Belle. That’s a very sweet remark.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/12/2023 11:45:00 AM

WoW! Lin, You described the lovely painting and much more. Excellent job. Have a wonderful weekend my friend:-)Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 5/12/2023 11:51:00 AM

I appreciate your comments and your friendship, Alexis. You have a terrific weekend too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2023 1:29:00 PM

wow, this is superb poetry, Lin. Did you just write it for the heck of it? Or is it for a contest?

Lin Lane
Date: 5/10/2023 1:54:00 PM

It’s a ‘just cus’ write. I enter very few contests. Thanks for the kind remarks, Andrea.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/10/2023 11:09:00 AM

You paint a colourful tapestry with your words Lin. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 5/10/2023 11:28:00 AM

Hi Tom. Thank you for enjoying the twilight moment through my eyes.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/10/2023 8:08:00 AM

Your colors make this poem so romantic.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/10/2023 9:08:00 AM

Hi Victor. Thank you very much.

Deb M

Date: 5/10/2023 5:51:00 AM

Lin how do you do it? Another amazing poem of romance and l just love the title and picture….is that one of yours? Debx

Lin Lane
Date: 5/10/2023 6:07:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Deb. The painting is not mine, but I may post one some time soon that is mine. I'll have to write poetry to accompany it first. ;-)

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/10/2023 5:27:00 AM

Lin, this one is just gorgeous! Amazing what a "romantic eye" such as yours can do!! Beautiful! Happy Wednesday xxoo

Lin Lane
Date: 5/10/2023 6:06:00 AM

Morning, Mike. I am so pleased with your comments and value them very much. Thank you and may your Wednesday give you reasons to be happy, too. xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2023 5:14:00 AM

Gorgeous use of colors through your tapestry! Love the alliteration too! Beautiful, Lin, the poem and indeed your soul. Higs ~ Kim

Lin Lane
Date: 5/10/2023 5:16:00 AM

awww Kim. Your kind words make me smile. Thank you, an awful lot, for the comments and the hugs.