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Twilight Stillness

The beautiful moment of sadness When sun is about to hide Nature stays still for a heartbeat Truth is lurking in shadows Lie and pretense have no place I dont envy the richest or beauty Just feel sad for all those Who dont feel this moment of stillness In the thichness of twilight hour When you know you belong to nature Its your home and your shelter Simple place where love can be born

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/2/2016 10:13:00 AM

Welcome to poetry soup, Amber. This is a wonderful community of poets that encourage and support each other. Loved your poem, by the way...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2016 8:26:00 AM

Amber, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@