Twilight Spreads a Lavender Dream - Triolet

A Triolet to Make My Day - 6-23-26
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Twilight Spreads a Lavender Dream

Twilight spreads a lavender dream
As sunlight slides behind the hill
When nocturns sing a first star theme
Twilight spreads a lavender dream.
Silver drips from gentle moonbeams
Onto the rose, a moonlight trill.
Twilight spreads a lavender dream
As sunlight slides behind the hill.
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Kerr Avatar
July 14, 2026 at 6:31 PM
Congratulations to you, Sam, on your success with this amazing entry. It oozes imagery and imagination. Thank you so much for congratulating me and your comments. Howard
Anaya Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 9:09 PM
Beautiful refrains, S a m. Congratulations on your win! Blessings
Buehler Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 2:41 PM
This poem is quite beautiful, and is a fave for me, Sam. Congratulations on your win. :)
Kingston Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 9:09 PM
This poem makes me yearn for our family's house on a lake. I closed my eyes as my husband read it to me. What a nice picture you painted as I listened to him. I could see it, touch it and almost smell it. I was left with a beautiful feeling. My favorite line reads, "twilight spreads a lavender dream". How beautiful!
Daniels Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 3:01 AM
Beautiful evocative triolet, Sam ~ I feel the sun setting & emergence of dreamworld. This is an excellent line : “ When nocturns sing a first star theme ”. Well done > have a lavender day. Xx.
Layne Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 7:58 AM
Beautiful imagery, Sam.
Kendrick Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Andrea's contest. Way to go. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 6:14 AM
Congrats, Sam! Lovely!
Poet Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 4:42 AM
Congratulations on your contest win with your excellent triolet poem, Dear Sam.
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 12:35 AM
Lovely as can be. I think people who did triolet using lavender word in it did really well with me! Congrats, Sam
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 4:08 PM
just lovely...especially liked 'twilight spreads a lavender dream' Perfect! wishing you well & faving.
Hind Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 4:23 PM
lovely work, Sam :)
Hind Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 12:57 AM
congrats on the contest, too HUGS
Hind Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 12:54 AM
of course, hugs, hun!! sorry I am just now seeing this, was checking your page out - <3
Kauffman Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 1:53 PM
Hi Paige! I’m so glad we got to share in the beauty of twilight. Sending you blessings and hugs ??
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 2:46 PM
Dear Sam, I really like this Triolet format - it matches the theme of serenity - in this poem, the twilight. I am very sorry that I am not staying very active at this site for a while, and missed reading and commenting on poems by my talented friends. I am delighted to let you know about my recent blog “An Excerpt From My Autobiographical Novel”. Hope you and your family are doing well. Love and hugs, Dearest Friend!
Kauffman Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 1:47 PM
Dearest Mala, thank you! I always love your thoughtful and caring messages. Can’t wait to read your blog. I know you have put so much time into it. Have missed you but it is always a wonderful surprise to find you when you post. Sending you blessings dearest friend. Looking forward to a time when you visit!
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