Francine Roberts Poet Than-Bauk

Twilight Descends

indigo sky
now tells my soul
goodbye the day

stars twinkle bright
as twilight falls
the night creeps in

twilight descends
as night lends voice
it mends my soul


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Francine Roberts  11/04/2012
for "Than-Bauk a Twilight" contest

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Keith Bickerstaffe May 1, 2012 at 10:19 PM Succinct, and beautifully written. There is certainly something special about twilight... as you say, 'it mends the soul. Best wishes, Keith

Terry L. Allen April 29, 2012 at 12:09 AM Nice pictoral well painted neat style. I enjoyed the picture that it painted. My favorite time of day in about 5:30 - 6:00 in the AM while most of the world is still asleep. I love to watch and listen to it wake up. Warm Huggs TLee

Sara Kendrick April 19, 2012 at 4:40 PM Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats ..Sara

Debbie Guzzi April 19, 2012 at 4:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2012 at 5:32 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Francine. Love, Carol

Carol Eastman April 18, 2012 at 12:29 PM I'm not usually in love with short poems but this was great. You can totally pull it off.

Joyce Johnson April 18, 2012 at 11:32 AM I don't know how she judged among these good offerings. Congratulations. Love, Joyce.

Barbara Gorelick April 18, 2012 at 7:36 AM This one is one of my favorites..very ceautiful. congrats. BG

The Situation April 13, 2012 at 11:44 PM for another day to begin.

Cyndi Macmillan April 13, 2012 at 8:53 PM I enjoyed this so much! I especially liked the last line. I think Nette will place this high, hon! Hugs, Cyndi

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2012 at 6:50 AM this is a very well done than-bauk. They are NOT easy to do. I think mine took nearly 2 hours and I kept falling asleep doing it!! (still didn't post it yet) I hope this scores high in the contest!

Laura Breidenthal April 11, 2012 at 5:22 PM This filled me with delightful visuals to the brain. Very awesome poem! Always, Laura