Lin Lane Poet Free verse

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Bite size No. 79 Contest   Sponsored by Line Gauthier

   December 23, 2023

Twilight Dancing

I watched pine tree silhouettes swaying,
dancing as sunlight drowned in the sea.
They waltzed around golden flames of fire
whose embers rose at twilight's gloaming,
kindling a myriad of distant stars to glimmer.

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Bill Baker December 23, 2023 at 9:56 AM Excellent poetry, Lin. The imagery was eloquently displayed throughout your poem. You're on a contest roll, my friend. I hope to see a win in them. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill Lin Lane December 23, 2023 at 3:34 PM I have lots of free time this week so I’m using it to write while I’m in the mood. Thank you. Bill.

Regina Mcintosh December 23, 2023 at 7:37 AM Just love stars. Lovely writing. God bless you sweet friend. God bless you with a Merry Christmas, love, Gina Lin Lane December 23, 2023 at 3:33 PM Me, too, Gina. They’re so ethereal. Hope your holidays are happy ones.

Tom Cunningham December 23, 2023 at 7:09 AM Beautiful imagery Lin, At our old house we had 7 poplars at the bottom of of the garden and I used to love watching them sway in the wind Tom Lin Lane December 23, 2023 at 7:12 AM I can picture what you're telling me, Tom. So many people don't see and appreciate such events in nature. I'm glad you do. Thank you.