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   December 23, 2023

I watched pine tree silhouettes swaying, dancing as sunlight drowned in the sea. They waltzed around golden flames of fire whose embers rose at twilight's gloaming, kindling a myriad of distant stars to glimmer.

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Date: 12/23/2023 7:37:00 AM
Just love stars. Lovely writing. God bless you sweet friend. God bless you with a Merry Christmas, love, Gina
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Date: 12/23/2023 3:33:00 PM
Me, too, Gina. They’re so ethereal. Hope your holidays are happy ones.
Date: 12/23/2023 7:09:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Lin, At our old house we had 7 poplars at the bottom of of the garden and I used to love watching them sway in the wind Tom
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Date: 12/23/2023 7:12:00 AM
I can picture what you're telling me, Tom. So many people don't see and appreciate such events in nature. I'm glad you do. Thank you.

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