Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Twilight Composers - Repost

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Here on the night before yesterday’s dream,
twilight composers retreat
Laughing at whispers a’ flow on the stream,
happily taking a seat

Practicing meadowlark lyrics to sing,
strumming a toadstool in tune
Awaiting the light that the fireflies bring,
blinking a wink at the moon

Tulips with tambourines gather around,
spider web chandeliers glow
Shade tree sonatas, a wonderful sound,
echoing up from below

Pine cone recitals and blueberry sighs,
star dust ovations in rhyme
Choruses sung beneath velveteen skies,
harmonic three quarter time

Orchestral canopies glisten above,
melodic rainbows the view
Performing songs written solely of love,
played on this evening for you

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I reposted this one because.....I really liked this one. : )

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Line Gauthier October 8, 2019 at 7:22 AM Lovely, Chris. Congrats on your POTD. Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 8:54 AM Thank you so much my friend.

W.A. Cholt September 30, 2019 at 12:12 PM Congratulations on POTD. Beautiful, precise, melodic rhyming. This poem is alive with rich and powerful imagery. Chris Green September 30, 2019 at 12:27 PM Thanks so very much. I am glad you liked it

Connie Marcum Wong September 23, 2019 at 2:34 PM Harmonic music of nature rings from this gorgeous POTD poem Chris! Congratulations on your deserving honor! xxoo Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 2:43 PM Thank you Connie. I am thrilled you enjoyed this evening musical interlude. : )

Alexis Y. September 23, 2019 at 2:15 AM Wow! Chris, You painted such a beautiful picture with words. I would love to be smack dab in the middle to see Nature's orchestra playing such a melody. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. You deserved it! :-) Alexis Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:47 AM Thanks so much my friend.

Kim Rodrigues September 22, 2019 at 5:29 PM Wow! So beautiful, Chris! You have outdone yourself with tulips with tambourines, spiderweb chandeliers, shade tree sonatas and blueberry sighs! Congratulations!! Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:47 AM Thank you Kim so very much

Hello There September 21, 2019 at 11:12 PM Hey there ~ Congratulations on this beauty!! Loved this one... Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:47 AM Hello there :) Thanks so much my friend

Susan Ashley September 21, 2019 at 8:31 PM Chris, your luscious imagery and lilting rhythm kindles and enchants my heart and imagination. A gorgeous poem. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:47 AM Thank you so much Susan

Lonna Blodgett September 21, 2019 at 8:07 PM What a wonderful poem. You are a troubadour in your muse. Lonna Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:46 AM Thanks so much Lonna

Jeanne Mcgee September 21, 2019 at 8:03 PM This is a fav with your wonderful images sung in three quarter time. Well done Chris, I love it....congrats on potd. Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:46 AM Thank you Jeanne

Brandy Nicole September 21, 2019 at 4:55 PM I really like this one too. :) Thank you for re-posting. I don't think I read it the first time. This last thought makes my heart smile. "played on this evening for you" So sweet, beautiful and romantic. You have such a wonderful heart. The images you paint, take me there. I am lingering in the melody. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:46 AM Thank you so very much Brandy

Sandra Adams September 21, 2019 at 2:41 PM back to say congratulations my friend on POTD with this beauty, your poetry is always worth reading again and again, it can brighten anyone's day :) hugs Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:45 AM Thanks so much my friend

Tania Kitchin September 21, 2019 at 2:09 PM Chris, congratulations on POTD with your beautifully written poem with beautiful imagery! Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:45 AM Thanks so much Tania

Jennifer Proxenos September 21, 2019 at 12:59 PM Hi Chris, Congratulations, an awesome repost of a wonderful poem that you were awarded POTD for. Hugs Jennifer. Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:44 AM Thank you Jennifer

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2019 at 11:43 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:44 AM Thank you Anne-Lise

Sunlite Wanter September 21, 2019 at 10:33 AM Congratulations! So deserving! Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:44 AM Thank you so much my friend

Mark Toney September 21, 2019 at 10:06 AM Beautiful music to my ears, Chris. Congratulations on Poem of the Day! ~Mark Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:43 AM Thank you Mark

John Gondolf September 21, 2019 at 9:03 AM This certainly was worth reposting, I didn't see it the first time. I enjoyed this whimsical romantic write, metered beautifully. Congrats on POTD, Chris. John Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:43 AM Thank you so much John

Joseph May September 21, 2019 at 8:55 AM An enchanting melody, ...Beautifully penned...Congrats on POTD Chris.. Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:43 AM Thanks Joseph

Gregory Richard Barden September 21, 2019 at 7:13 AM Love this, Chris, in all its elements and entirety ... your work never disappoints! Congratulations on Poem of the Day - a perfect one. Blessings! :o) Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:43 AM Thank you so much Greg

Winged Warrior September 21, 2019 at 5:23 AM Back to Congrats!! on your POTD!! Chris...deserving of honor my friend...^WW^ :o) Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:42 AM Thanks so much my friend

Jan Allison September 21, 2019 at 2:58 AM Absolutely gorgeous imagery Chris this is music to my ears, I especially loved the 2nd and third stanzas and the poem is very well deserving of POTD:-) into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 9:42 AM Thank you Jan. So very much

John Hamilton September 20, 2019 at 9:56 AM I remember this one Chris, still shines bright second time around! Chris Green September 20, 2019 at 10:09 AM Thanks so much John.

Heidi Sands September 20, 2019 at 9:22 AM This one is packed with so many good lines. ! I can feel the song today :) Chris Green September 20, 2019 at 10:06 AM Thank you so very much my friend. Happy you liked this one.

Brenda Chiri September 20, 2019 at 1:50 AM Beautifully written!;) Brenda Chiri September 20, 2019 at 8:41 AM I probably did but doesn't make it any less beautiful! Plus when I deleted my old account all my comments were deleted to! So it's a win win!;) Chris Green September 20, 2019 at 8:11 AM Thank you so very much Brenda. I am happy you found this one and enjoyed it so much but I think you may have seen this one before so thank you extra much for reading and commenting again. : )

Hello There September 19, 2019 at 10:51 PM Love this music of the night. Pleased to add it to my collection of favorites :) You are absolutely amazing at using imagery!! Even if I had the vision, I wouldn't be able to find words to express it like this. Chris Green September 20, 2019 at 8:10 AM I'm sure you would do beautifully, your poetry is amazing. Thank you my friend

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