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like an interrupted dream shadows of the one who inspired it linger like morning dew no aroma and no taste yet I'm left breathless as thoughts reminisce i listen to this tired heart as one deep breath results in a thousand sighs and i don't want to be found but yearn to understand why i feel like a million crumpled stars, silently sprinkled like paint drops protecting the moon feeling like glue holding the universe together and who am I to disturb it? her beauty a merited gift her departure unnecessary her lips without speaking could rewrite history and I wonder can she hear these sighs? her call is the one I want to answer for eternity to speak until no words remain give until there is nothing defeat to her submission is life's greatest victory twilight aurora night flower of this heart like a rainbow your presence brightened the horizons but just like the stars you disappeared with daylight
Silent One Simple Musings 15 July 2017 I'm back! Contrary to idle gossip and rumours, my account was not banned nor deleted. I left for personal reasons. They say never go back, but I felt the need to return to support my friends and new poets. I know there is some negativity on this site, but it has so much potential. Anne Frank once said "In spite of everything, I still believe people are really good at heart." and I know some went to the extreme liberties of writing poem about me, but what I do not understand is the obsession with it after I left. Hide behind metaphors, I hope it makes you happy and write as much as you like, because it does not bother me, in fact it makes me laugh and I already forgive you. We are supposed to be adults, if you have a problem, then discuss it. This is not high school. It is a poetry site, a community and one that together everyone can make a great place.

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Date: 5/10/2020 12:11:00 PM
Hi Silent One~ Told you I was going to read this today. It's just fanastic. Both piem and comments. Thank you for being so very open and so encouraging. Panagiota xxoo
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Date: 3/14/2020 7:29:00 PM
SO, I was on Soup for a brief cup of tea in 2016, and you were my very first commenter. You left this total stranger some very kind words and welcomed me to the community, and that has left a lasting impression on me. You and I have both taken a needed hiatus, and have both decided to return, and I thought you should know I'm very glad you did. Beautiful poetry here it its wistful longing. Warmly ~ John
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Date: 3/7/2020 8:55:00 AM
Going back to your first post, this time round, completely blown away S.O, amazing poetry
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Date: 3/1/2020 8:26:00 PM
This is beautiful. So many emotions lingering within. Your note shows how strong you truly are. Walking away, when faced with trials- we as humans tend to do. Sometimes, we need to gather our thoughts. Returning. Means you are not giving in to those distractions or trials. You are ready to face them. Be brave!! Strong!! Thank you for being here, for being You. ~ Brandy
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Date: 2/26/2020 5:21:00 PM
Oh, my! This is glorious!
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Date: 2/25/2020 1:30:00 PM
Hello Silent One you made a great point here and I agree with you my friend. Now for your poetry. Loves comes and sometimes leaves in a hurry That is not true love. True love last a life time. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 2/25/2020 12:22:00 PM
As always, Silent One, emotional, deep and beautifully written.
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Date: 2/22/2020 10:33:00 AM
Never saw this before! Gee! You really are fantastico. I was pretty new when this was written. It's really a masterpiece. I stick with Gregory's comments. Panagiota xx
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Date: 2/3/2020 12:11:00 PM
I like your beautiful imagery in this poem. Congrats to you!
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Date: 12/29/2019 2:43:00 PM
Hello Silent One, i going to speak to you on Soup Mail. I will do the comment on thes poems later today. By for now Darlene
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Date: 11/23/2019 10:22:00 PM
I had to check out your first post here too. Another great poem! I didn't realize there was drama here. What would cause that? Nevermind. Just keep writing great poems.
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Date: 10/22/2019 1:14:00 PM
I read the poem, I felt the poem, I seen and felt your muse!...... lmao then I read you! You are back and with fire let it do its thing; it's working. Awesome work hands down. use it!
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Date: 10/11/2019 6:22:00 AM
Favorites...no aroma and no taste but I’m left breathless; why i feel like a million crumpled stars, silently sprinkled like paint drops protecting the moon, and the final two verses. Wonderful, Silent!
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Date: 9/20/2019 12:57:00 PM
This is a wonderful write, with many exquisite layers and images ... anyone can produce decent poetry with a few quick google searches, but to write with ambiguous beauty is a gift, (and one I appreciate) ... I don't have time to read or comment much of late, but this was indeed worthwhile. I have nearly left a few times, especially last week, when some of the true vitriol and "gaming" came my way from the upper crust - that is, I've decided, the LAST thing I'll do ... (continued)
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Date: 9/20/2019 12:57:00 PM
(2) ... for THEIR sake - the ones who feel I don't "conform" or play the game correctly. Oh, I get few comments these days as a result, but then I've never bussed the right tushies, so it's nothing new, (and it didn't discourage me when nobody knew my name). Stay true to YOU, S1, and your gifts ... the blessings will be added unto those who walk the narrow path. Going into my favs - superb! :o)
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Date: 9/3/2019 2:00:00 PM
I had no idea...I've been gone for a time myself...for reasons of healing...
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Date: 7/14/2019 11:45:00 PM
Silent, I’m inspired.
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Date: 3/24/2019 9:58:00 AM
We have missed you! So glad you are here! Seriously, do you have to start out with something this BEAUTIFUL? Of course, you did. it is making me breathless. What gorgeous imagery! Love every stanza. Welcome home, Silent One.
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Date: 1/30/2019 4:04:00 AM
Hi Silent, this is a wonderful write, It moves me, the words caress the heart. It has your deep emotion and it just sings to me. From start to finish your words captivated me. This has to be a most wonderful fave. Have a wonderful wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 1/1/2019 7:58:00 AM
As with all of your poetry this one I thoroughly enjoyed. It is beautifully written with well depicted imagery.
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Date: 11/8/2018 2:48:00 PM
This is a beautifully written poem.
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Date: 10/4/2018 12:23:00 PM
Hello Friend. As always find such joy in the ability you have to touch hearts around the world. Stay always! NEVER be silent.
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Date: 4/16/2018 6:31:00 PM
This made my heart jump Silent One. I am glad you are here. And I am glad you were with me when I was but a 'Shadow.'
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:19:00 PM
Good gracious. Is this poet a published author? I've read several poems by this poet and they are among the best I've ever read. Damn, I wish I could write like that.
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Silent One
Date: 4/1/2018 3:22:00 PM
No Scott, I am not, nor wish to be published... Thanks for the visit..
Date: 3/22/2018 3:08:00 PM
A beautiful and deeply romantic poem. Very touching my friend. I felt it at every stanza. Welcome back.
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Silent One
Date: 3/22/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thank you my friend..
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