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like an interrupted dream shadows of the one who inspired it linger like morning dew no aroma and no taste yet I'm left breathless as thoughts reminisce i listen to this tired heart as one deep breath results in a thousand sighs and i don't want to be found but yearn to understand why i feel like a million crumpled stars, silently sprinkled like paint drops protecting the moon feeling like glue holding the universe together and who am I to disturb it? her beauty a merited gift her departure unnecessary her lips without speaking could rewrite history and I wonder can she hear these sighs? her call is the one I want to answer for eternity to speak until no words remain give until there is nothing defeat to her submission is life's greatest victory twilight aurora night flower of this heart like a rainbow your presence brightened the horizons but just like the stars you disappeared with daylight
Silent One Simple Musings 15 July 2017 I'm back! Contrary to idle gossip and rumours, my account was not banned nor deleted. I left for personal reasons. They say never go back, but I felt the need to return to support my friends and new poets. I know there is some negativity on this site, but it has so much potential. Anne Frank once said "In spite of everything, I still believe people are really good at heart." and I know some went to the extreme liberties of writing poem about me, but what I do not understand is the obsession with it after I left. Hide behind metaphors, I hope it makes you happy and write as much as you like, because it does not bother me, in fact it makes me laugh and I already forgive you. We are supposed to be adults, if you have a problem, then discuss it. This is not high school. It is a poetry site, a community and one that together everyone can make a great place.

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Date: 2/17/2019 7:51:00 AM
Amen.
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Date: 1/30/2019 4:04:00 AM
Hi Silent, this is a wonderful write, It moves me, the words caress the heart. It has your deep emotion and it just sings to me. From start to finish your words captivated me. This has to be a most wonderful fave. Have a wonderful wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 1/1/2019 7:58:00 AM
As with all of your poetry this one I thoroughly enjoyed. It is beautifully written with well depicted imagery.
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Date: 11/8/2018 2:48:00 PM
This is a beautifully written poem.
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Date: 10/4/2018 12:23:00 PM
Hello Friend. As always find such joy in the ability you have to touch hearts around the world. Stay always! NEVER be silent.
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Date: 4/16/2018 6:31:00 PM
This made my heart jump Silent One. I am glad you are here. And I am glad you were with me when I was but a 'Shadow.'
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:19:00 PM
Good gracious. Is this poet a published author? I've read several poems by this poet and they are among the best I've ever read. Damn, I wish I could write like that.
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Silent One
Date: 4/1/2018 3:22:00 PM
No Scott, I am not, nor wish to be published... Thanks for the visit..
Date: 3/22/2018 3:08:00 PM
A beautiful and deeply romantic poem. Very touching my friend. I felt it at every stanza. Welcome back.
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Silent One
Date: 3/22/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thank you my friend..
Date: 3/19/2018 7:28:00 AM
Great to have you back (I left too not that anyone noticed), stay strong. Your words are the elixir to make the worst days taste better and this poem is a beauty.
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Silent One
Date: 3/19/2018 7:29:00 AM
Thank you.. People did notice Phil.. Glad you are back
Date: 3/13/2018 3:31:00 AM
Good lines. Mature decision
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Silent One
Date: 3/19/2018 7:29:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 3/8/2018 3:38:00 AM
This is beautiful. Period.
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Date: 2/28/2018 10:59:00 PM
I love the write. I came to the poem from Poetrysoup email. So it was all one write. Then I came to leave a thumbs up. And it was your poem. And below was your I'm back :) I' didn't know you left. But I like your words anyway. Awsome day to ya :)
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Date: 2/28/2018 9:20:00 AM
Hello my Friend, I loved your poem, and I like the way you think. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Have a nice day. Don Northfieldpoet
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Date: 2/27/2018 7:08:00 PM
So beautiful collection dear silent one,
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Date: 2/27/2018 4:01:00 PM
Breathtaking words never softened a somber hard such as these. Sticks and stones SO. Live your life. You are a beautiful soul with such kindness.
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Kelli.. I am sure you commented before, but appreciate your visit and comments again..
Date: 2/27/2018 2:42:00 PM
My Greetings to you first of all Twilight Aurora ......wow, Great writing indeed some unforgettable lines, are "give until there is nothing defeat to her submission is life's greatest victory........... "but just like the stars you disappeared with day light....." A truly well written poetry on the "Twilight aurora"
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thank you Vasudevan... I appreciate your visit..
Date: 2/27/2018 1:36:00 PM
Hello Silent One. I have never been 'in love' but, just by reading your poems such as this one, I know you have. I can feel the love in your most romantic poetry and it's nice to be there. I didn't realize you had left Poetry Soup for a time, perhaps, because I was gone for most of 2016. I became disillusioned, when several of the poets that I followed left suddenly but I am happy to have discovered the wealth of your poetry upon my return. Please stay for the inspiration you offer others.
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 1:39:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Janece... I will not be leaving now..
Date: 2/27/2018 12:21:00 PM
I love your stream-of- consciousness approach. It gives the poem a really beautiful rhythm. It is a lovely poem and one that I will come back to re-read again and again.
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Kim..
Date: 2/27/2018 12:19:00 PM
people are really good at heart." hugs dear friend...
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 12:24:00 PM
Most are...Thanks
Date: 2/20/2018 10:03:00 AM
Sorry you ran into some di--- You mentioned negativity The only comment I got that I did not like is some idiot saying my poem was to long To each their own right On another subject my wife has been following some Facebook war about gun control those republicans are so combative if you are a republican , oh well
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 12:24:00 PM
Thanks...I am not American so not a Republican..
Date: 2/14/2018 7:34:00 AM
In my opinion, your verse beautifully describes the depth of love feelings.
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Date: 2/27/2018 12:19:00 PM
I love your reply Hai Hon
Date: 2/7/2018 3:52:00 PM
Strong poem and words in the end. There is a Japanese proverb:" Fall seven times and stand up for the eighth", you are stronger than you think, Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you Alis, this is a fictional poem.. I appreciate your feedback..
Date: 1/25/2018 1:44:00 PM
Divinely magical.....you had me spell bound from start to end. Thank you Silent one.......Amazing!
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 3:54:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 1/5/2018 2:57:00 PM
and this one... you know, I nearly left this site a couple of days ago, there is negativity here...but I figure, let them walk towards their own black hole, the ones that matter will find your light. This poem is LIGHT.
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2018 3:03:00 PM
You are right there is...However you should do what you do amd spread your positivity through your great poems...
Date: 12/31/2017 6:46:00 PM
The ending of a poem is so important, and your ending was perfect here, at least in my opinion. It at once 'captured and released' all the moods, questions, and the tension of the poem. Bravo.
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