Twilight

Twilight sneaks in and pulls 
me closer to the edge 
where she waits 
in all her splendor 
gleaming in her element 
in all her safety 
those ruby red orbs 
slipping off into tomorrow 
guiding me to view her pleasure 

still 

I walk slowly along the surf
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 10:11 AM
This poem shines so wonderfully Tim, love the last line! A fave:-)
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 6:58 AM
- Gives me a beautiful picture, Tim ... lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
White Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 1:18 AM
It's beautiful, exactly the place where I am most in my element, and it also hints at more, but still.... that surf....
Vaso Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 9:19 PM
Twilight also speaks softly with soothing wise words! Beautiful.
Wolf Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Very mysterious, Tim! I won't pretend to know what this is truly about, but I love its poetic flow!
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