Twilight

The sun sets on fringes As the tired day cringes Hope in the sky hinges On tinges of twilight As the night sky infringes On my thoughts, that singes! 4.7.2021 Sponsor: Line Gauthier Contest: Bite size Poem no.10

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/6/2021 2:57:00 PM

Delightful monorhyme Caro with creative imagesl! Congratulations on your win!

Carol Mitra
Date: 7/6/2021 6:26:00 PM

Thanks dear Sam :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/6/2021 8:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A pretty "TWILIGHT" write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Carol Mitra
Date: 7/6/2021 6:26:00 PM

Thanks dear Paula :)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/6/2021 6:04:00 AM

Superb rhymes in a piece with a strong message. Well penned. Best wishes, Brian

Carol Mitra
Date: 7/6/2021 6:26:00 PM

Thanks dear Brian :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/6/2021 5:06:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Carol Mitra
Date: 7/6/2021 6:25:00 PM

Thanks dear Christuraj :)