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` It was the bottom of the ninth, two outs We were down by one run Bases were loaded I was at the plate with a full count I glanced to the stands and saw her I smiled at her, she smiled at him I struck out, twice Since the World Series is about to start I decided to post something baseball themed. : )

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Date: 10/22/2019 2:51:00 PM
Oh boy...lol! I think you got hit by the baseball. It was all a dream. <3 Kim
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Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 3:14:00 PM
I knew I felt something. : ) Thanks Kim.
Date: 10/22/2019 4:00:00 AM
Haha! So clever Chris! Made me smile and laugh out loud if I'm honest!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/22/2019 9:35:00 AM
Well not haha funny but it was cute!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Brenda. I am glad you got a chuckle out of this one.
Date: 10/21/2019 5:09:00 PM
Oh no...a sad shame, my friend. At least you didn't get hit (or hit on ;) by the pitcher ~ xo
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Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 8:42:00 AM
The sad thing is I never even made it to first base. : ) Thank you HT.
Date: 10/21/2019 4:44:00 PM
lol..I love it Chris. I had so much fun watching the last World Series! This poem is fun! Thank you :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 5:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi. I was beginning to think there weren't many baseball fans around here. : )
Date: 10/21/2019 3:45:00 PM
Awww so sad but very cleverly written my friend
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Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 4:37:00 PM
Thanks Sandy. Just trying a bit of baseball/love humor. : )

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