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Twenty Years From Now

In twenty years from now, I float in air.
Small remnants of my poetry remain
In my friends memories, they're everywhere,
They smile at them, for I am free of pain.

My one book dances everywhere on stage.
Its pages live in bright-lit evening moon.
I watch intent, unseen, I'll never age;
I hum while they dance: ethereal tune.

My friends and family will once a year
Remember how I used to make them laugh,
Or maybe cry, or both, but I can hear
Them drink to me, from this crystal carafe

     They'll rise each year, in early morning skies
     A green balloon, the colour of my eyes

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3d place in contest: YOU twenty years from now
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri
May 1, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lamoureux Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 7:44 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again Darren.
White Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 7:59 AM
I like it that you came back to read :)
Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 7:39 PM
I have returned to congratulate you on a terrific win, Duir! I love this sonnet!
White Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 12:33 AM
Thanks so much Budgie my friend :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Congrats, I'm glad you entered!
White Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Thank you, I am too :)
May Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 3:41 PM
Congrats on your win Darren
White Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Joseph, thank you :)
Smith Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Nice job Darren!!!
White Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 3:10 PM
Thank you Jeremy :D
Pett Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 5:35 AM
Wonderful sonnet Darren, I think your poetry will be remembered and recited for centuries to come, your an inspiration. :)
White Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Roy, thank you so very much, you make me smile and shy :)
Tano Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 1:27 AM
Wow! Words are amazingly blending! Surely your words will remain forever continue writing to inspire beginners!
White Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 1:31 AM
Thank you very much for your wonderful compliment!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 6:24 PM
A lovely piece, I'm glad you decided to write it. God willing in twenty you will still be writing your legacy.
White Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 12:41 AM
That would be something indeed :) I know that none of us can look into the future, I'll keep an open mind.Thank you for reading my entry!
B. Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 4:12 PM
This brought tears to my eyes! Know your kindness and talent will be celebrated then as it is now :)
White Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 12:42 AM
I am happy you like my poem, thank you :)
Hopkins Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 1:22 PM
beautiful.
White Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 1:34 PM
Thanks!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 6:25 AM
You make me smile and cry. A beautiful entry Darren, 7 and best of luck for the contest. xomo
White Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Thank you ma mo :)
Vaso Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 9:44 PM
If only there was a balloon for me, lovely poem Darren!
White Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 12:44 AM
There will be a balloon for you, loads of them <3
Murray Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Perhaps twice what you will be in twenty years Darren! We all toast your brilliance here.
White Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 12:44 AM
Heh Jean, thank you! Let's drink to that :)
Ricci Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:45 PM
Hi Darren. This is lovely. We as people may have to leave earth but your work will live on. You wrote a wonderful response to the challenge and contest. Your words Darren make me both smile and sigh a tear. Well done completely. Good luck with the contest.
White Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Thank you Lisa, also thank you for something you did NOT say... and because of that is so very valuable to me :)
Herlihy Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 9:53 AM
Utterly lovely, a fantasy hopefully more appropriate to "40 years from now". As the Arabs always say: a long age for you. John
White Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 10:42 AM
They do :) Thank you.
Marie Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Your 'one book dances' light up the soup and beyond, everyday I feel blessed you share your heart with your stunning poetry that evokes every emotion, giving great awareness to important topics with the craftsman of a 'true artiste'. I celebrate you each day Darren, as for the next 20 years, I will watch with pride to see your dreams fulfilled, one happy smiling penguin face at a time:) Lovely sentiments to remember always. Just beautiful, Darren. A 7
White Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 10:06 AM
Thank you Lynn..... It's just, I want to soupmail you...
Williams Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 8:50 AM
More like 80 years you will still be around, and I my dear friend will be looking down on you and toasting the most famous Darren White. This beautiful sonnet does take my breath away. A super 7+++
White Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 9:14 AM
Hahaha, the boundless optimism of you all makes me smile affectionately :) Love it Maria, thank you! Also for the 7.
Green Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 8:21 AM
You and your poetry and your positive outlook on life will outlive all of us. here's to the next 20 years and hopes that every thing good will come your way.
White Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 8:30 AM
I am so glad that my friends believe in this and in me, even if and when I don't see it myself :) Here's to the next 20!
Smith Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 8:16 AM
In twenty years you and me will be singing and joking in a cafe somewhere...love it
White Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 8:28 AM
That would be so wonderful! First I have to make it, but IF I do :) YES!
Solomon Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 6:05 AM
Brendan and Budgie LOVE this sonnet, mate! Cheers, green eyes! Best of luck to you, Duir!
White Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 6:10 AM
Lol B&B, don't you have anything better to do than reading my scribbling? Thanks guys!
May Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 5:53 AM
We all hope our memories live on in the "bright-lit evening moon". a heartfelt and enchanting write Darren
White Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 6:11 AM
Joseph, thank you so very much for liking my sonnet.
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