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Twenty

Twenty seconds time
Is the time that it takes me
To update Facebook


Twenty minutes time
I could have written poems
Instead, arguments

In twenty days time
To Russia, China and back
But no, mostly naps

In twenty more months
I might go study abroad
I’m safer back home

It’s been twenty years
I thought by now I’d be rich
I’m working at it

Twenty more years gone
I thought I’d be married now
Go figure, I’m sick

They say twenty months
But two years if I’m lucky
Hardly long enough

Twenty day respite
Then awful physicians
Unfortunately

Twenty minutes pass
And I forget the last five
But I still take naps

Count back from twenty
I should update my status
My eyes are drowsy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2010 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest James. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:15:00 AM
Imprssive multi-Haiku, and Haiku seems the perfect form for this coming tragedy. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:57:00 AM
congrats on the featured poem--are you really sick? If so I am so sorry and Prayers for you!
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 3:10:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 6/23/2010 2:45:00 PM
PS--Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Karen
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Date: 6/23/2010 2:45:00 PM
Interesting reflection on the concept of time. Thank you for taking us on this journey with you. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 6/21/2010 3:14:00 PM
I like the imagination use of time in this haiku series. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:03:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup James. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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