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Twenty-Four Hour Gloom

Precious one lift’d & cocoon’d in a funerary shroud. Mer- men and ladies, about, in the sky’s ebb and flow. The fertile fountain’s full of penny stars behind clouds. Rubbing chin and mouth of the earth…questions…sigh. Ribbon’d rainbow’s proud arc when tears cloud the sky. Splish-splashing happily ever after, sunspry of golden koi. Kiss-lips must be held closed…why quiet…no thunder?! Moon in masquerade parade of lightning and wonder. The rod is the zigzaggedy cane of a lonely old widower. Wan hand touches his face. Torrent-voicebox’ hoarse. Bat signals and cotton nightingales in collision course. Their eeking and warbling, wrestletoss of soak’d sheets. Sharp needle and thread punches holes in clock’s light. Twenty-four hour gloom of dawn and dusk, wound tight. Infuriating how the sun, moon, angels and clouds move on. 8/18/2021

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Date: 8/20/2021 2:44:00 PM
Kim, your whimsy blend of homespun curt words, has truly tipped the scales of sadness and dealt out truths to naught just one. Magnificent rhyme my friend, Aloha!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2021 7:04:00 PM
Thank you, dear William! Aloha!
Date: 8/19/2021 2:49:00 PM
Whew! It does get better, do hang in there. Well penned.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2021 3:18:00 PM
The hardest thing is seeing my dad so heartbroken. God bless, dear lady!
Date: 8/19/2021 2:01:00 AM
Dreadful images you described, Kim... But beautifully penned...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2021 3:44:00 AM
Thank you, Supraja.
Date: 8/19/2021 1:57:00 AM
Seems like the end of the world. Don't worry. There is still time. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2021 3:44:00 AM
Grief expressed. Hugs ~ Kim

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