'twas the Night

‘Twas the night before Christmas and I didn’t care;
I had dozens of latkes I had to prepare.
The menorah was ready, with candles to light,
Waiting there by the window, a wonderful sight.

The presents were wrapped and I lined up the dreidels;
The soup was a’bubble, with floating knaidels.
The applesauce waited to chill in the fridge
In a Chanukah bowl. (Yes, I tasted a smidge.)

The cookies were baked like my grandmother taught,
(So much better than any that anyone bought)
Shaped like candles and dreidels and six-sided stars;
There were plenty to fill cookie platters and jars.

When I suddenly sensed there was something the matter.
I raced to the kitchen – the oil was a’splatter!
For while I was fixing the festive display,
I should have been frying (not quite my forte).

The first batch of latkes was burnt to a crisp
And smoke filled the kitchen (much more than a wisp),
But tying my apron for take number two,
I ditched all the burnt ones and knew what to do.

I lowered the flame and reheated some oil,
Plopping spoonfuls of batter I wouldn’t let spoil.
Then I conjured my childhood and Chanukahs past,
When I had no idea years would fly by so fast.

And I pictured my nana and grandma, as well
As my parents, my grandfathers and Aunt Sydelle
And my brothers and sister and cousins galore
And my uncles and aunts I’ve not mentioned before.

While my latkes were frying, so crispy and gold,
I remembered how Chanukah used to unfold,
When we played with our dreidels and gathered our gelt,
In our family’s embrace and the love we all felt.

So I cooked the new latkes with patience and care,
Knowing that with my kids and my grandkids I’d share
All the pent-up emotions I’ve hidden inside
With a platter of latkes, now perfectly fried.

And to all who will celebrate Chanukah time,
I do hope there’s a lesson for you in this rhyme – 
For the very-best feelings our childhoods instill,
Through traditions, our hearts and our bellies will fill.

										December 7, 2022
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May Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 6:48 AM
Congrats on your win Ilene, Wonderful write, Merry Christmas
Alex Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 7:53 PM
"the very-best feelings our childhoods instill, Through traditions, our hearts and our bellies will fill" - Great lesson, indeed! Congratulations!
Watt Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 10:07 PM
This is so rich with the sights and smells and family and traditions and memories and generational continuity; all the very best of what the holiday season means... written in that wonderful 'Twas The Night Before lilt. A fave, and a big congrats for your beautiful POTD ~ John
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:53 AM
hey john! it's always a pleasure to hear from you! your comment is just the chicken soup i need today!
Flood Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 1:36 AM
Tardy congratulations on POTD, Ilene. I read this poem and I could have sworn I left a comment… I must have had an episode. Congrats again. Terry
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:52 AM
thank for reaching out, terry! i very much appreciate it!
Messina Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 4:26 AM
This is written SO well, Ilene. "Love it" Congratulations on POTD. Happy Chanuka as well. Charlie
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:50 AM
much appreciated, charlie! wishing you a happy holiday, too!
M  Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 8:05 PM
Congratulations on POTD Ilene….Debx
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:50 AM
thank you very much, deb!
Nicole Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 6:50 PM
Memories are both precious and priceless. So sweet of you to share these tender moments. Happy Chanukah, Ilene. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:50 AM
thank you for your kind comment, brandy! happy holidays!
Gorelick Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 5:38 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Ilene! Brought back memories. All you need is knishes and cheese blintzes with sour cream and a Chanukah bush! Robert
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:49 AM
ha! as a kid i used to take the tinsel from the neighbor's discarded christmas tree and decorate the bushes in front of my house, much to my mother's dismay...
Ashley Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 5:31 PM
Dear Ilene, your lovely holiday poem is so endearing. Delightful imagery and wonderful rhymes fill the poetic page with warm nostalgia, celebration and love. Congratulations for the worthy and well-deserved honor of POTD! Warmest wishes and Happy Chanukah! ~Susan
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:48 AM
thank you for that lovely comment, susan! best wishes to you for a happy holiday as well...
Kitchin Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 3:02 PM
Ilene, a wonderfully entertaining poem with a sweet ending, congratulations on POTD!
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:48 AM
thank you for stopping by, tania!
Mccann Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 2:19 PM
Absolutely inspired poetry, fun and sweet. I love it! Elizabeth
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:47 AM
thanks for your kind words, elizabeth!
Slaughter Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 11:49 AM
An absolutely delightful read and a perfect choice for POTD, Ilene...and I'm not even Jewish! Are you going to enter this in the "The Night Before.." contest?
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:47 AM
thank you, jim! your support means a lot to me. that contest inspired this poem and yes, i did enter it (even though i rarely enter contests these days)...
Mcconnell Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Such a beautiful Christmas piece ilene, lovely rhyme and flow showing great insightfulness too. Congrats on the POTD, blessings always,Gordon
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:46 AM
much appreciated, gordon! have a wonderful holiday!
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 10:38 AM
- So many wonderful memories, Ilene - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Bauer Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 10:46 AM
thank you very much, anne-lise!
Anaya Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 8:43 AM
Mazel tov! I love cooking stories, lovely story Ilene, family is everything. I tried making Latkas one Christmas, ha, first time is always a good time, I've made Matzo ball soup as well, why? But tamale's a favorite. All traditional foods. Happy Chanukah! Congratulations on your POTD!
Bauer Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Thank you, Anaya! Those traditional foods really make the holiday special to me. Best wishes for a lovely holiday yourself…
Logan Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 7:11 AM
Ilene, I thought I might see this one recognized as potd. It's as well written as the classic. Congratulations!
Bauer Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Wow! That compliment makes my heart sing, Jenna! Thank you!
Hankins Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Back to say congratulations on your P.O.T.D. I enjoyed this the second time around as much as the first time around.
Bauer Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 9:14 AM
That is so sweet, Milton! Thank you again!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Ilene! This is a wonderful poem with memories and reminiscences of the celebration! "And I pictured my nana and grandma,.." How beautiful! Love and blessings ~ Mala
Bauer Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Thank you, Mala! I can’t bake my cookies without thinking of my grandma or make my latkes without thoughts of my nana…
Wolf Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 5:14 AM
This is a great poem, Ilene. So worthy of POTD. Mazel tov!
Bauer Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 9:12 AM
It means a lot to hear from another latke eater, Gershon! Thanks for stopping by again!
Kyser Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 2:25 AM
That's wonderful, Ilene - so glad for your POTD, but mostly for the traditions and happy memories captured in this poem.
Bauer Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 9:10 AM
Thank you, Jeff! My cookies take hours to make but I send them out to my siblings and Aunt Sydelle (the last one remaining of her generation) every year…
Baker Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 2:14 AM
Beautiful poem and a fun read. Puts me in the mood for the season. Congratulations on your POTD, Ilene. Enjoy your special day! Bill
Bauer Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 9:07 AM
Thanks so much, Bill! I wish you a wonderful holiday as well…
Ireland Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 1:13 AM
Nice one ilene. Congrats on POTD
Bauer Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 9:06 AM
Thanks, Terry! Much appreciated!
Jones Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 1:03 AM
Wonderful potd! Loved
Bauer Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 9:06 AM
Thank you for the shout-out, Karen!
Cunningham Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 12:33 AM
Back with big congratulations Ilene on this well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
Bauer Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 9:04 AM
It’s always a pleasure to hear from you, Tom! Thank you again!
Borke Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 2:58 PM
Which year is this about? Is it an older poem?
Bauer Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 5:37 PM
It’s a new poem, partly fiction but with very accurate reminiscences…
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