Twalha

So many times I've written, re-written, and tore papers that I write my poem about you. I don't destroy them because I'm shy or terrified that you'll meet my poetic madness; I destroy them because "sweet", "beautiful", "pretty", "wonderful".....can't describe you perfectly. It's only my heart that can understand who you are, describing you with a language that only two, close souls can understand..... Date of Entry: 8/11/2016

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Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/18/2016 9:12:00 PM

Congratulations, Teddy! ...Fran

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2016 7:41:00 AM

Than you so much Francis, for your warm applause!! :-)

Lu Loo

Date: 9/18/2016 5:57:00 PM

Teddy, I remember this one vaguely but as I re-read it a few times I know it had to make the list. So profound and so much said in such few words. very romantic...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/18/2016 7:27:00 PM

Welcome, Laura. Thank you so much for your kind applause, and placing my poem in your lovely contest!! *^_^*

Lu Loo

Date: 8/28/2016 11:55:00 AM

Teddy, a lovely poem dear friend...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest (sorry for the late comment) :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/6/2016 4:54:00 AM

It's alright, Laura. Thank you for your kind applause!! *^_^*

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/27/2016 11:20:00 PM

Congrats on your placing high. Well done with this lovely thought. :) Sunita

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/28/2016 2:38:00 AM

Thank you so much for your warm applause, Sunita!! *^_^*