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tuscan hymns

dusk rains hope perfumed to quench crestfallen roses as crickets susurrate hymns for a new tuscan dawn

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/24/2023 2:45:00 PM

Wow Inky. You imagery is enthralling! Congratulations! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2023 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/24/2023 7:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful/fun "tuscan hymns" write. Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........

Valsa George

Date: 11/23/2023 8:33:00 PM

"...crickets susurrate hymns" ! Love the expression ! Great ninette. Congratulations on your first place win, dear Empress.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/25/2023 6:59:00 AM

Ah im so grateful for your support always beautiful valsa thank you so much

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2023 8:14:00 PM

A glorious ninette here. Congrats on my contest

Ink Empress
Date: 11/25/2023 6:51:00 AM

Sweet andrea you’ve made my day really thank you so very much i appreciate you

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/23/2023 5:25:00 PM

A smile for the imagery, Congrats! ~ Ed

Ink Empress
Date: 11/25/2023 6:51:00 AM

Thank you so very much truly

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 11/23/2023 12:29:00 PM

What can I say? This is a great ninette. Congratulations on the win in the contest Ink. Tuscan dawn with all the colours reflected among the beautiful landscapes. What a wonderful tuscan hymn....! Have a nice evening

Ink Empress
Date: 11/25/2023 6:55:00 AM

This means alot thank you so very much for being so kind and supportive: truly grateful for your congratulations and also your sincere feedback. Sending you light always

Silent One

Date: 11/13/2023 2:31:00 PM

Thats a lovely title... you seem to be excelling in these forms of poetry, dear queen of poetry... another from for your tick list... lovely imagery in this one...

Fading Star Silence

Date: 11/12/2023 8:43:00 AM

How do you ink such magnificence? Pulling at your readers/my heartstrings with the ethereal way you weave, reaching depths so deep, it’s like chasing the sun..waiting for your next breathtaking piece, written with the deepest parts of your soul, my beautiful soul sis!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/11/2023 3:45:00 PM

How pretty.

Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/10/2023 8:32:00 PM

from dusk to dawn, a delicately framed portrait

Paige Hind

Date: 11/10/2023 6:30:00 PM

I could really feel this one; very real.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/10/2023 6:20:00 PM

I can surely hear the sound of the crickets and the beautiful songs they create dear friend, a very talented write :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2023 1:36:00 PM

Alright. This unique one is very contest worthy. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/10/2023 1:27:00 PM

dearest Ink--your Ninette mesmerized me. I loved it from the start! I liked the entire poem, but especially liked 'dusk rains hope.' So poetically inspirational and comforting, just was the crestfallen roses. Just exquisite beyond words. Am faving because I just loved this one. Hugs, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/10/2023 11:44:00 AM

Simply beautiful, my friend.

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/10/2023 10:43:00 AM

Dear Ink, This Ninette is truly magnificent. Your enthralling lexicon, refined word choice, and enchanting imagery never fail to captivate my feelings. The colors in this poem are dynamic and charming, like a spellbinding exhibit of wizardry. It depicts a scene in which the twilight sprinkles hope to cleanse the shadows and sooth the melancholy roses. BOL in the contest.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/10/2023 10:21:00 AM

dusk is always such an evocative word - beautifully incorporated into this ninette - good luck if this is for a contest. I'm just getting carried away writing ninettes after writing the first x

Deb M

Date: 11/10/2023 9:41:00 AM

How very lovely IE….! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/10/2023 9:40:00 AM

- Beautiful written, Ink :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 11/10/2023 8:57:00 AM

Wow . What a beautiful one

Hiya Sharma

Date: 11/10/2023 8:35:00 AM

A very beautiful ninette this is! You always win my heart with your gorgeous vocabulary, eloquent word choices and mesmeric imageries..this poem is melting in bright poetic hues of magic, where dusk rains hope to cleanse the darkness and soothe those crestfallen roses, finally giving rise to a new tuscan dawn through a journey of melancholy. I'm in love with this write,truly! So delicately you've crafted thus, giving a vivid experience for the reader in a profound way! A Fav, best of luck to you