tuscan hymns

dusk rains hope perfumed to quench crestfallen roses as crickets susurrate hymns for a new tuscan dawn
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Fowler Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 2:45 PM
Wow Inky. You imagery is enthralling! Congratulations! :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful/fun "tuscan hymns" write.  Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
George Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:33 PM
"...crickets susurrate hymns" ! Love the expression ! Great ninette. Congratulations on your first place win, dear Empress.
Empress Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 6:59 AM
Ah im so grateful for your support always beautiful valsa thank you so much
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:14 PM
A glorious ninette here. Congrats on my contest
Empress Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Sweet andrea you’ve made my day really thank you so very much i appreciate you
Ebbs Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 5:25 PM
A smile for the imagery, Congrats! ~ Ed
Empress Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Thank you so very much truly
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 12:29 PM
What can I say? This is a great ninette. Congratulations on the win in the contest Ink. Tuscan dawn with all the colours reflected among the beautiful landscapes. What a wonderful tuscan hymn....! Have a nice evening
Empress Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 6:55 AM
This means alot thank you so very much for being so kind and supportive: truly grateful for your congratulations and also your sincere feedback. Sending you light always
One Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 2:31 PM
Thats a lovely title... you seem to be excelling in these forms of poetry, dear queen of poetry... another from for your tick list... lovely imagery in this one...
Silence Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 8:43 AM
How do you ink such magnificence? Pulling at your readers/my heartstrings with the ethereal way you weave, reaching depths so deep, it’s like chasing the sun..waiting for your next breathtaking piece, written with the deepest parts of your soul, my beautiful soul sis!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 3:45 PM
How pretty.
Hind Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 6:30 PM
I could really feel this one; very real.
Rose  Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 6:20 PM
I can surely hear the sound of the crickets and the beautiful songs they create dear friend, a very talented write :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 1:36 PM
Alright. This unique one is very contest worthy. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Pandit Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 11:44 AM
Simply beautiful, my friend.
Poet Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Dear Ink, This Ninette is truly magnificent. Your enthralling lexicon, refined word choice, and enchanting imagery never fail to captivate my feelings. The colors in this poem are dynamic and charming, like a spellbinding exhibit of wizardry. It depicts a scene in which the twilight sprinkles hope to cleanse the shadows and sooth the melancholy roses. BOL in the contest.
M  Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 9:41 AM
How very lovely IE….! Debx
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 9:40 AM
- Beautiful written, Ink :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Rhymes Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 8:57 AM
Wow . What a beautiful one
Sharma  Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 8:35 AM
A very beautiful ninette this is! You always win my heart with your gorgeous vocabulary, eloquent word choices and mesmeric imageries..this poem is melting in bright poetic hues of magic, where dusk rains hope to cleanse the darkness and soothe those crestfallen roses, finally giving rise to a new tuscan dawn through a journey of melancholy. I'm in love with this write,truly! So delicately you've crafted thus, giving a vivid experience for the reader in a profound way! A Fav, best of luck to you
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