Richard Lamoureux Poet Quatrain

Turning Pages To Paradise

Cast upon a book
Her angel eyes
Within her mind
This beauty flies

She's not restrained
By earthly woes
Within her mind
Imagery flows

In this garden
Beneath morning star
Wings to paradise
She travels so far

Look of serenity
Yet inside there's heat
On passionate pages
Her heart skips a beat

A sweet knowing smile
Spreads across her face
Imagining strong hands
Removing her lace

He wrote her this book
For their wedding day
Joined in the garden
Paradise starts today


Isaiaha Zerbst's "Poem in Paradise Contest"

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Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2014 at 7:00 PM gosh, richard. I am not seeing congrats on this one. I would assume it had made the list. it was such a nice one!! I love how this one heated up!! I'm gonna check something and soupmail you.

Daver Austin July 22, 2014 at 11:16 AM Thanks for the visit. Love does bring out the poet in one. I can so relate. Love, Dave Richard Lamoureux July 23, 2014 at 7:43 AM My pleasure Daver.

Pandita Sietesantos July 22, 2014 at 9:55 AM All I can say is Bravo and wish I could write like this! This has winner all over it! Richard Lamoureux July 22, 2014 at 10:00 AM You are kind, after reading your work I don't think you take a back seat to anyone my dear.

Paul Callus July 22, 2014 at 9:07 AM Very touching and romantic with a slight tinge of sensuality. That book contains eternal memories! // paul Richard Lamoureux July 22, 2014 at 9:23 AM Thanks Paul, I'm glad you like it.

Arthur Vaso July 20, 2014 at 12:54 AM Beautiful and romantic, Loved the Title, and well as you know, this style of writing if one of my favorites! Richard Lamoureux July 20, 2014 at 8:31 AM Thanks again Arthur.

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2014 at 12:04 AM wow, Richard, you really did well with this theme. Wish I could be so inspired by the topic as you were. Soupmail. Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2014 at 9:03 AM Good morning Andrea.

Nette Onclaud July 18, 2014 at 4:14 PM enthralled by your imagery, rich.. great job.. huggs Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2014 at 9:03 AM Thanks and a big hug.

Charmaine Chircop July 18, 2014 at 2:16 PM So 'heavenly'beautiful this is..Must be a poem from paradise.Im going to favor this beauty dear friend. Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2014 at 9:04 AM ;0) thanks Charmaine, hugs Rick.

James Fraser July 17, 2014 at 4:49 PM Delightfully flowing poem Richard, and it's sure to do well in the contest, deservedly so, James...... Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2014 at 7:33 AM Thanks James.

Robert Nehls July 17, 2014 at 8:20 AM A book to last the lifetime of a great love. Very well written, Richard. Well thought out and so well written. Great flow and wonderful rhymes. Loved it, my friend.... Robert. Richard Lamoureux July 17, 2014 at 8:27 AM Thanks Robert.

Shadow Hamilton July 17, 2014 at 4:42 AM so sweetly lovely Rick gl in contest hugs Richard Lamoureux July 17, 2014 at 7:12 AM Thanks Shadow.

Eileen Manassian July 16, 2014 at 10:01 PM I knew you'd come up with something exquisite, Richard. Richard Lamoureux July 17, 2014 at 7:13 AM I'm glad you like it.

Tim Smith July 16, 2014 at 1:17 PM How romantic to write book on your wedding day. Hopefully with many chapters to be written. Richard Lamoureux July 17, 2014 at 7:14 AM That is a nice thought.

Monterey Sirak July 16, 2014 at 8:41 AM Oh I love this one! I can just imagine how the pages of the book will be filled as the years go on. Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2014 at 8:45 AM I imagined that as well. Thanks Monterey.

Casarah Nance July 16, 2014 at 8:14 AM Oh that would be a book I would like to get my hands on... ;) well done Richard, another beautiful write :) Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2014 at 8:18 AM I'm glad you like it Casarah.

Connie Marcum Wong July 16, 2014 at 5:17 AM A romantic soul lives within you Richard. It is lovely to see it emerge in this creative piece! Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2014 at 8:19 AM Awww thanks Connie, what a sweet thing to say.

Ana Espinola Collins July 15, 2014 at 7:50 PM What a romantic paradise...Beautiful write Richard....A sure winner! :) Ana Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2014 at 8:24 AM Thanks Ana, I hope you are right. ;0)

Jan Allison July 15, 2014 at 4:25 PM beautifully crafted and so romantic. good luck in the contest. hugs Jan xxx Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2014 at 8:28 AM Hugs back Jan.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 15, 2014 at 1:11 PM Beauty beyond words, is an exclusive write Richard! Gl in contest! Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2014 at 8:30 AM You are kind, thanks Dr. Upma.

Keith O.J. Hunt July 15, 2014 at 12:57 PM Nice imagery Richard, enjoyed this gem! Always~~Keith Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2014 at 8:32 AM Thanks Keith, I'm glad you like my little poem.

Poet Tacito July 15, 2014 at 11:10 AM The way it's described here, paradise started will before "today". This was adorable & charming! Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2014 at 8:33 AM I think you have a point their Drake. Thanks for the visit.