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Turning Pages To Paradise

Cast upon a book Her angel eyes Within her mind This beauty flies She's not restrained By earthly woes Within her mind Imagery flows In this garden Beneath morning star Wings to paradise She travels so far Look of serenity Yet inside there's heat On passionate pages Her heart skips a beat A sweet knowing smile Spreads across her face Imagining strong hands Removing her lace He wrote her this book For their wedding day Joined in the garden Paradise starts today Isaiaha Zerbst's "Poem in Paradise Contest"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2014 7:00:00 PM

gosh, richard. I am not seeing congrats on this one. I would assume it had made the list. it was such a nice one!! I love how this one heated up!! I'm gonna check something and soupmail you.

Daver Austin

Date: 7/22/2014 11:16:00 AM

Thanks for the visit. Love does bring out the poet in one. I can so relate. Love, Dave

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2014 7:43:00 AM

My pleasure Daver.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/22/2014 9:55:00 AM

All I can say is Bravo and wish I could write like this! This has winner all over it!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/22/2014 10:00:00 AM

You are kind, after reading your work I don't think you take a back seat to anyone my dear.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/22/2014 9:07:00 AM

Very touching and romantic with a slight tinge of sensuality. That book contains eternal memories! // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/22/2014 9:23:00 AM

Thanks Paul, I'm glad you like it.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/20/2014 12:54:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic, Loved the Title, and well as you know, this style of writing if one of my favorites!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2014 8:31:00 AM

Thanks again Arthur.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2014 12:04:00 AM

wow, Richard, you really did well with this theme. Wish I could be so inspired by the topic as you were. Soupmail.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2014 9:03:00 AM

Good morning Andrea.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/18/2014 4:14:00 PM

enthralled by your imagery, rich.. great job.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2014 9:03:00 AM

Thanks and a big hug.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/18/2014 2:16:00 PM

So 'heavenly'beautiful this is..Must be a poem from paradise.Im going to favor this beauty dear friend.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2014 9:04:00 AM

;0) thanks Charmaine, hugs Rick.

James Fraser

Date: 7/17/2014 4:49:00 PM

Delightfully flowing poem Richard, and it's sure to do well in the contest, deservedly so, James......

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2014 7:33:00 AM

Thanks James.

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/17/2014 8:20:00 AM

A book to last the lifetime of a great love. Very well written, Richard. Well thought out and so well written. Great flow and wonderful rhymes. Loved it, my friend.... Robert.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/17/2014 8:27:00 AM

Thanks Robert.