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Turner Tides

Rampage rumbling water roars dig the shores Heavy hard they grapple trees and humans Tumbling turner tides glide no one adore Frightened humans, they run! Run and run fast! As they desire to survive ever more From angry nimbus clouds darkening span To merry-go-round waves muddy wet skirt Gnawing so hungry to launch damage pert Beeping screams a reigning train of terror Rattling man's safety in viral bellow The ground shut bullet rush without error All will see an avalanche fresh fresco the scathe and cries a full furor mirror Waiting for hope - the sun's chrome of yellow Abrupt sea assault bridge to sudden death Taking all weak and anyone with breath © O. E. Guillermo 9:48pm September 28, 2009 *** FROM A DOCUMENTARY I watch about killer tsunami Sponsor Giorgio A. V. Contest Name Top Gun Poetry - Structured forms - Iambic verse II placed 2nd

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/1/2014 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this formed poem so well written.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 4:08:00 AM

thanks MAurice. :D

Jan Allison

Date: 9/30/2014 11:49:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) hugs jan xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/1/2014 2:01:00 AM

thanks Jan.. hugs and hugs.. :D

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/30/2014 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this very powerful poem about powers that cannot be leashed Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/1/2014 2:01:00 AM

Thanks Brenda... :) Appreciate it.. :D

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/30/2014 5:51:00 AM

Dropping back to congratulate you, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/1/2014 1:59:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Ram.. :) Appreciate it.. :D

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/29/2014 8:11:00 AM

You are unmatchable at rhymes and the flow of words,,, Always enjoy reading you dear/// Malik

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/30/2014 1:48:00 AM

:) thanks much Malik.. Appreciate your drop by.. :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/29/2014 1:36:00 AM

wow very beautifully painted picture excellent piece

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/30/2014 1:44:00 AM

thanks much Liam.. :) appreciate your support.. :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/28/2014 8:39:00 PM

Damn Girl!!!! You flowin genius true with this poetic touch snd smart spirit, wow...you really embody the Sea's devsstating wrath, merciless skill, astounding energy, vision, violent force of awe..." Gnawing so hungry to launch damage pert...taking all weak and anyone with breath" frickin brilliant Olive! You makin fresh poetry tonight...a FAV...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/30/2014 1:40:00 AM

thanks much Justin.. :) I appreciate as usual your generous remark. :)

James Fraser

Date: 9/28/2014 11:33:00 AM

The wrath of nature is simply powerful. The two recent ones in Thailand & Japan were staggering to watch on TV, just imagine what it must have been like to have been in the midst of it, quite incredible. As with her wrath, there's casualties :( - Fine poem Olive, and thank you for visiting my humble poems :)x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/29/2014 10:27:00 AM

always welcome Mr. James.. :D GOd bless you.. :) Thanks too. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/28/2014 10:53:00 AM

Beautifully descriptive on a terrible natural disaster Olive. One of my son's friends was in the boxing day tsunami about 10 years ago - she saved her grandparents lives when she realised what was happening and they climbed on the roof of the hotel - they had just learned about tsunamis at school! hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/29/2014 1:49:00 AM

ThanksJan..:) GBU

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/28/2014 9:09:00 AM

I tried once this beautiful form. Nicely done on death and disasters, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/29/2014 1:48:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Ram..;) I appreciate your drop by..:)