Turn Of Leaf

Winter with thoughtful wings slips upon
When her voice is too frail to hold life—
Everywhere green, this light she's from;
In gentleness back the forest bites,
As feathery flakes shed through all with white.
Though sun beams on frost's admirable silk
At this true angle on my window sill,
While the glass in me seems to be dying—
When dead leaves lose their beauty's will,
Toned blossoms, out of Winter's ghost, spring.

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Date: 8/5/2024 12:31:00 AM
Beautiful ending. I liked the line about winter's voice being too fragile. Lovely. Hope all is well.
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Date: 4/16/2024 11:17:00 PM
Simple profundity in such simplicity. You capture the hope in Winter and rebirth in Spring. Bravo.
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Date: 3/29/2024 5:23:00 PM
' As feathery flakes shed through all with white. ' Such a beautiful image. A soft reminder that Spring will soon sweep through, and buds will be in full bloom. My best to you Paige. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 3/26/2024 2:44:00 PM
Wonderful, Paige! … In gentleness back the forest bites, As feathery flakes shed through all with white...last two lines too
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Date: 3/25/2024 3:50:00 PM
Deep analogy here...nicely done
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Date: 3/23/2024 10:06:00 AM
Wow that last line is simply splendid. You chose a cool topic for your Dizain.
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Date: 3/22/2024 3:52:00 AM
Dear Paige this poem speaks volumes to my heart and really is so very well articulated with excellent rhymes and rhythm of words flowing so seamlessly! I especially love the lines “ At this true angle on my window sill, While the glass in me seems to be dying— When dead leaves lose their beauty's will,” wow! Definitely this is one of my favorite poems ever written by you! I love it! Pleasure reading this
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Date: 3/21/2024 3:10:00 PM
a beautiful dizain, i love that last line..you seem to be able to turn your hand to any form and do it justice...thanks for stopping by and commenting on my latest :)
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Date: 3/21/2024 8:05:00 AM
Pretty final two lines. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 3/21/2024 1:04:00 AM
Dear Paige, this is absolutely stunning and breathtaking. So poetically expressed with vivid imagery and I love the title too. Every line is exquisite with all its descriptions. I’d have to quote every line as they are all terrific. Such a profound last line with the arrival of spring. Amazing and in awe of this poetic masterpiece. Inspiring. Loved it. Hugs of admiration xx
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Date: 3/20/2024 7:25:00 PM
This is a poem that has deep meaning. The symbolism as it applies to life, indicates fragility. Thank you for a beautiful dizain.
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Date: 3/20/2024 6:50:00 PM
Dear Paige, your exceptional imagery and poetic expression is poignant and potent. Vivid, emotive and simply splendid. Your last line is a rich finale. The innocence of rebirth portrayed with a delicate touch. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/20/2024 6:14:00 PM
"At this true angle on my window sill, While the glass in me seems to be dying—" powerful and beautiful! This might be my most favorite of lines you have ever written. A Favorite for me! Finest regards A.S.
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Date: 3/20/2024 5:54:00 PM
Good poem, Paige. Love the wintry mood it invokes and the rebirth at the end. :)
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Date: 3/20/2024 5:51:00 PM
Dear Paige, your poem beautifully captures the transition from winter to spring, the delicate dance of nature's renewal. I loved your imagery of winter's gentleness and the eventual blossoming of spring evoke a profound sense of transformation and hope. It's wonderful to see the cyclical nature of life and the resilience inherent in every season. - Blessings, Daniel
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