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Turn Me On

Sticking your key in me Goes straight to my battery Then my starter starts spinning Sending sparks to my ignition Your gas goes into my carburetor Causing an explosion in my piston well When you press on my accelerator That makes me move faster When you turn me over in the morning You always signal first You make my eyes bright with delight But when it rains You wipe my tears away You make me sing when you play with my CD Please don't STOP My check engine light needs turning on My engine isn't HOT! enough (Making it clear this is a girl car, lol)

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Date: 11/7/2019 1:46:00 AM
Wonderful example, Bobby , this will help me think I hope of something to write. Hugs
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Date: 11/3/2019 8:56:00 PM
Thanks for exemplifying what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for my placements in your previous contests. God bless you.
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Date: 11/2/2019 1:28:00 PM
Loud lough. Not a smile. Wonderful. 'll try.
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Bobby May
Date: 11/2/2019 1:47:00 PM
:-)
Date: 11/2/2019 8:34:00 AM
Haha!...lol This one made me laugh and smile, Bobby:-) Your awesome poem is both a free verse and a personification! Hopefully I'll come up with something as ingenious.
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Bobby May
Date: 11/2/2019 10:35:00 AM
I am sure you will my friend!! Thank you Edward!!
Date: 11/1/2019 9:16:00 PM
very cool example, Bobby. Get that engine running!! vroom vroom. thanks for my win in your last contest too.
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Bobby May
Date: 11/2/2019 10:36:00 AM
You are welcome and thank you for reading my poem!
Date: 11/1/2019 2:04:00 PM
u sure had me smiling Bobby, love the double entendres lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Bobby May
Date: 11/1/2019 2:07:00 PM
LOL JAN, love ya Sis!!
Date: 11/1/2019 8:36:00 AM
I will never look at a car the same way again ._.
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Bobby May
Date: 11/1/2019 9:01:00 AM
LOL Connor
Date: 11/1/2019 5:49:00 AM
Nice one Bobby !;)
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Bobby May
Date: 11/1/2019 7:01:00 AM
Thank you Brenda!!
Date: 10/31/2019 8:20:00 PM
Wow. This is a terrific extended metaphor that doesn't miss a beat. A FAVE for me, Bobby! Super-duper! Cheers, Gershon
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Bobby May
Date: 10/31/2019 8:23:00 PM
Thank You Gershon
Date: 10/31/2019 4:59:00 PM
Bobby, lol .. I had a car I loved too once I calked him Thunder ...vavooom! Great example for your contest!
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Bobby May
Date: 10/31/2019 5:11:00 PM
Thank you, vavooom lol
Date: 10/31/2019 9:07:00 AM
.......... hot ... from the engine, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bobby May
Date: 10/31/2019 9:26:00 AM
LOL!!! Anne-Lise you should have someone check your coolant
Date: 10/31/2019 9:00:00 AM
Nice one. Clear and full of double meaning. Kind wishes, Kai
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Bobby May
Date: 10/31/2019 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Kai Michael!!

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