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Turmoil

Starlight Like sequins on a Dress A gown of Black Across The water A blanket fastened To unknown No light, no shadows In the blackness Of the universe No one will ever Know The secrets In its depths Night Willing to be forgotten Reminding us we’re alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/13/2009 11:12:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Melina. I have enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2009 8:46:00 AM
Terrific poem Melina, a warm welcome to the Soup to you>>James
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Date: 9/13/2009 4:51:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Melina. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors.I hope you will be joining us as a premium member here at the site. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2009 7:38:00 PM
An eye catching poem, poised.
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Date: 9/12/2009 12:44:00 PM
Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/12/2009 12:43:00 PM
Excellent use of imagery to describe the mystries of the universe, Melina. The first verse is stunning! Great poem! And welcome to Poetry Soup. We look forward to seeing more of your work. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2009 9:02:00 AM
nicely writen, keep sharing, welcome to poetry soup!! glad to have you.
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Date: 9/12/2009 8:48:00 AM
hey, interesting piece! wonderful imageries, you are such a creative poet. please learn more about poetry forms so as to avoid using i do not know. keep writing. Adeleke
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