Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes: "Turbidity" is an Accentual Meter poem I wrote on January 14, 2016 with the intent of delving deeper into the notion or attribute of turbidity from the standpoint of a theme being not clear, not transparent; in effect, being opaque or obscured to the reader. From a poetic perspective, it can serve as that perfect "Literary Conceit" when an experienced writer purposely seeks to cloud or obscure the true meaning of a particular poetic motif. Some poets actually do this by intent, many times just to get the readers to possibly think and use their imaginations. In other instances, some inexperienced writers are still learning the trade craft of writing and perhaps are not so well-versed, at times, in the art of clear and concise writing. But, "clear and concise," per se doesn't always directly transfer to poetic exposition. (This largely depends on the poet -- of course!!) And, I think, some other poets just tend to be turbid in nature and orientation, because that's the way they actually think. This makes the challenge of reading, understanding, and deciphering some poetry all the more interesting. At least, this is my take on this fascinating subject. Things would truly be boring, if all of us wrote our poetry and other literary works exactly the same way!! Great and exciting writing does indeed add zest to life!! (Gary Bateman - April 30, 2016) (Accentual Meter)  

Categories: allegory, analogy, emotions, imagination, metaphor, passion, and symbolism.

Turbidity

Turbidity

Turbidity’s
An artifice of
Being Human
One who is
So confused
So disordered
Or even one
With a Turbid
Imagination!

Being Turbid
Allows its Owner
To be or seem to be
In turmoil or
In degrees of
Real or Fake
Confusion
Making situations
Quite interesting!

This attributes
A most likely
Pejorative symbol
When intentionally
Used to obfuscate
Human interactions
Or to be just
Plain difficult or
Uncooperative!

Possessing bouts of
Seeming Turbidity
For the Poet
Can also be
That perfect
Literary Conceit
To challenge
To mystify
All readers true!

Such notions of
Verisimilitude
Or better yet
Literary Truth
Methinks would
Maketh the likes of
Keats, Eliot, Pound
Among other greats
Jumpeth all for joy!

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, 
January 14, 2016 (Accentual Meter)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 2:05 PM
This delightful poem surprised me w/revealing your keen sense of humor, Gary. As always, your knowledge and literary wisdom is much appreciated by us low-brow types. I wasn't familiar w/that title word, so I didn't know what to expect. It looked interesting, and you didn't disappoint. Keep the love and knowledge flowing, bruh. Sharp witted poetry, my friend. Love always.
Bateman Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 4:34 PM
Hello Freddie, Thanks very much for your very thoughtful read of "Turbidity." This one is definitely not for the "casual reader." I actually wrote it to highlight the use and interaction of "Literary Conceit" that some of the great poets have used (and still use) to conceal the true meaning of the theme they're writing about. This one was definitely interesting to put together in one, hopefully, coherent thought!! I'm glad you liked this one Freddie!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 12:49 PM
- I feel a part "Turbid" myself .... my confusion ... a challenge to find poets to "rely" on - Mostly I records my poems and sign off - This is a poem as "feeding my thoughts" a fabulous poem written by my fav. poet - Thanks Gary - 7 +:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 1:29 PM
- No "creepy thieves" in sight .... it is going fine :) - Thank you my friend - Of course you are my "fav." poet - I'm kind of out of ideas ..... but I will put my thinking hat on :)) - Say hello to Ingrid from me - hugs and love // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Hello Anne-Lise!! Thanks, as always, for your very kind words here, and for the "TR"!! I'm your favorite poet?? WOW -- I must then endeavor not ever disappoint you (HA!! HA!!). "Turbidity" seemed like a very good theme to undertake. (Another one called "Fickle" was a really fun Verse write too.) Liam and I have done a couple of co-writes already. I've been talking to Liam about a possible three-way effort that all of us can maybe do in the future. The key is to find a really interesting topic of interest. (More to follow on this. . . .) I should be releasing another poem soon called: "Poetic Encryption Like Ancient Egyptian." (It will be a very interesting narrative write.) Hope all is going better now!! Cheers and Best from Ingrid and me.
Petersen Potter Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Hi G!A very beautiful n' powerful poem, that you've penned here my dear friend Gary.Excellent!Very beautifully written in this outstanding Free Verse style.Just awesome!Perfectly done,G!Enjoyed it!Golden pen!A 7 +!A fav.Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always.Just take good care of each other now.All the best to you always,G!Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:)D
Bateman Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Hello "D"!! Thanks as always for your really gracious and uplifting comments here!! The Accentual Meter writes are always much fun. And thanks for the 7+FAV!! It's great always hearing from you. And I hope to be posting more new poetry very soon. All The Best . . . Gary
Lindley Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 9:35 PM
Writing to be mysterious, vague or deeply thought provoking can take many forms. For example one may write simply with a very forceful and clear message as did Frank Stanton. Or one may deliberately force the reader to delve deep to understand. I tend to write in the simple form most but sometimes wander into deep waters and even deliberately hide certain things for the reader to find. Great poem on the subject my friend. A7
Bateman Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 6:13 PM
Thanks Robert for your exquisite and revealing commentary here. And, of course, for the SEVEN!! It pleases me greatly that you liked this write on "Turbidity." I have a couple of more unique poems that I will be posting here during the first week of May. I will be in touch again soon. I'm working now on a special short story for my second book, entitled: A Dark Presence Arrives, which is about, none other than: "Mephistopheles." Best Always, Gary
Breidenthal Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Excellent notion, Gary. This was truly an enjoyable verae to read today. As my writings are more on the vague, obscure side, I greatly admire your 'clear and concise' style of writing. It takes a lot of skill and practice to write this way. I imagine it comes more naturally to others. Beautiful and reflective work- Always, Laura
Bateman Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 7:48 PM
Thanks Laura!! I always appreciate your comments!! I have a couple of more that I will be posting in the next couple of days: "Fickle" and "Poetic Encryption Like Ancient Egyptian." I think you may find them to be very interesting. Continued best wishes to you on your poetry and other writing endeavors!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Trifiatis Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Thank you my dearest friend, Gary, for I have learned something important today! Now I know how to describe the Greek government that for more than a year now pretends to do something while is doing nothing. This has caused trouble in Greece and in Europe! A seven!
Bateman Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 5:00 PM
Thanks Demetrios!! I think you're certainly right about what you say. "Turbidity" probably does indeed describe the confusion and chaos in the Greek government. We can only all hope that all gets better. We have a Nightmare in the USA called "Donald Trump," aber ich bin sicher dass Frau Clinton wird gewinnen mit keinem Problem in November!! I will be taking a deeper look at your new book tomorrow as well. It does indeed look very, very good indeed. My compliments once again to you and your co-author for such great work on your book. Bravo!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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