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Tunnel of Hate

Some children found her battered, bloody corpse inside the tunnel, face down in  the trash; they screamed, 'She's hurt' and ran to fetch some help.  Detectives wondered why he'd left her cash. They didn't catch the brutal killer (or at least, they still don't know he's doing time now as 'The Beast'). written 26th January for Kai's Murder in the Tunnel contest

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Date: 2/6/2021 3:25:00 PM
Unsolved murders become mysteries....so many questions and not enough answers. An excellent write, as usual, my friend. // paul
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Date: 2/1/2021 10:28:00 AM
Now that is some murder story - I would give this poem a 1st win, excellent poetry and as Carolyn says, you leave the reader hanging! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/28/2021 2:29:00 PM
WoW! Jack, Short and concise but written very well. The sad thing is in this cruel world; it’s not uncommon for children to make a discovery such as this. It had intrigue and mystery too. I enjoyed the touch of humor at the end. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day- Alexis
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Date: 1/27/2021 4:54:00 AM
A compelling story, Jack! Great write, my friend. You leave the reader "hanging," waiting for more! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/26/2021 6:22:00 PM
WoW! So much hideousness. Hate needs no reasons. It just is. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/26/2021 6:15:00 PM
I guess it wasn't a robbery just revenge hate. Good luck, Jack, in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/26/2021 3:01:00 PM
good one, Jack, you are always good with both funny poetry and mystery types. Thanks for all your recent comments. I wish I could have done two entries for that one contest where I wrote of John. your name is also short and you are such an amazing friend!
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Date: 1/26/2021 1:59:00 PM
I have heard of the tunnel of love. It would be awful to be on a ride in a tunnel with someone who hated you. Reads like a good contender for the contest at least to me. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/26/2021 12:03:00 PM
ha ha ha is it Mark Labett for the chase lol:-) I too have gone over to the dark side and posted my effort lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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