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Tunnel of Death

On a cold Winter day, the couple went for a walk. Shelby and Andrew held hands, and their talk soon turned to starting a family. Shelby wanted children, but Andrew's smile disappeared, daunted by her eagerness since they married two years ago. "Slow down, Shelby. I thought we'd take it slow." Her heart beat quickened, annoyed at his reply. Thunder rumbled, and dark clouds filled the sky. Raindrops felt like knives piercing Shelby's face. They sheltered in Rank's Tunnel, a cold, dismal place. Her tears of sorrow showed the depth of her pain. Andrew said, "We're gonna go through this again?" She reminded him they agreed before they married, to have children, but Andrew turned away, harried. "Andy, tell me what's made you change your mind?" He had to confess his affair. To that he was resigned. He told her of his adultery. There was more to say, but Shelby was devastated and tried to run away. Andrew reached for her, but he slipped and fell on the tunnel floor, where water began to swell. His head was bleeding, he was alive but dazed. Shelby reached for a rock. In anger and half-crazed, she struck the wound again and again. How he bled! Andrew's body was limp, and she knew he was dead. The rain continued falling; water rising in the tunnel. It was swiftly moving, like a small stream, a runnel. Shelby walked away, not regretting what she'd done, glad that she hadn't yet told him she carried his son. She reported him missing, and when he was found it was deemed Andrew had hit his head and drowned.

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Date: 2/6/2021 9:39:00 AM
With a title like that this was one I had to read. I was not disappointed, this is dark and represents the emotions that love, loss and life oft brings. Greaaaaat poetry--a fine fav.. God bless my friend...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/7/2021 4:14:00 AM
Thank you, Robert.
Date: 2/4/2021 7:46:00 PM
Hello Jenna … this is quite a tale and a darn good one. Love, bitterness and hate and a baby involved - great Jenna - Lindsay
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 1:50:00 AM
Thanks, Lindsay. Makes me wonder if she got away with it. I should write a follow-up...10 years later.
Date: 1/30/2021 2:35:00 PM
Very plausible Jenna, so well executed, and thought out, I reckon Sherlock Holmes might smell a rat though, I say in jest, but like you hinted, the evidence was washed away, great story, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/30/2021 2:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, David. The story grew from the picture, and my imagination got a bit naughty. lol I appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 1/30/2021 9:59:00 AM
You're quite the story teller, Jenna, nicely done my friend. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/30/2021 10:09:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment, John. She seems to have gotten away with murder, but will it play on her mind when her son starts asking about his father? Yes...I believe it will.
Date: 1/30/2021 9:55:00 AM
oooh what a cad he deserved what he got! great story telling jenna:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/30/2021 10:08:00 AM
lol Jan. I was pretty sure that's what you'd think. The female perspective on a cheating spouse. I'm also sure that child would not named Andrew. Thanks!
Date: 1/30/2021 8:11:00 AM
Quite a story Jenna, violence is never the answer and some will say he deserved it. Great take on the contest theme and good luck. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/30/2021 8:27:00 AM
I would never condone murder unless in such a fictional setting. Thanks for the great comments, Tom.
Date: 1/30/2021 7:28:00 AM
Oh my, you did this well. I suspect this will do well in the contest. Thanks for your kind comments on my latest piece. Hugs Rick.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/30/2021 8:26:00 AM
We shall see how it fares in the contest, but in any event, it was fun to deal with the murder of that adulterer! haha Thanks so much, Rick.
Date: 1/30/2021 7:12:00 AM
Perfect Jenna! Quite a good story - love it! Best wishes in the contest :) Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/30/2021 8:25:00 AM
Thank you ever so much, Linda.
Date: 1/30/2021 5:23:00 AM
That's quite a story. And the perfect murder. ~~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/30/2021 6:58:00 AM
Thank you, Victor, You're steadfast in reading me, and it's really appreciated.

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