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in a black bubble of seclusion sitting silent the moon hangs low in the stillness of the night so clearly so distinct the memory of you it calls to me a whisper on wings of butterflies a shiver tingling way deep inside sweet charming haunting beckoning AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on March 27, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND #1098 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on February 10, 2020

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Date: 3/30/2022 1:04:00 AM
"black bubble of seclusion" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2022 7:49:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Christuraj ~
Date: 2/10/2020 11:51:00 PM
The moon you saw, I saw it also.. yes, it was hanging low.. But it never calls me.. Seems you desperately miss someone... Short but emotional..
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Date: 2/11/2020 12:14:00 AM
Thank you, Jenish, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 2/10/2020 11:26:00 PM
Line, your poem's powerful imagery of a moonlit night sets the scene perfectly for the haunting of a lost love. Beautifully written!
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Date: 2/11/2020 12:13:00 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment, Evelyn.

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