Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Tuned In

in a black bubble of seclusion
sitting silent
the moon hangs low
in the stillness of the night
so clearly

so distinct
the memory of you
it calls to me
a whisper
on wings of butterflies

a shiver tingling
way deep inside
sweet charming
haunting
beckoning



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on March 27, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND #1098 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Christuraj Alex March 30, 2022 at 1:04 AM "black bubble of seclusion" - Beautiful. Congratulations! Line Gauthier March 30, 2022 at 7:49 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Christuraj ~

Jenish Somadas February 10, 2020 at 11:51 PM The moon you saw, I saw it also.. yes, it was hanging low.. But it never calls me.. Seems you desperately miss someone... Short but emotional.. Line Gauthier February 11, 2020 at 12:14 AM Thank you, Jenish, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 10, 2020 at 11:26 PM Line, your poem's powerful imagery of a moonlit night sets the scene perfectly for the haunting of a lost love. Beautifully written! Line Gauthier February 11, 2020 at 12:13 AM Thank you so much for your beautiful comment, Evelyn.