Tulips Tip Off Spring Time

haiku Poetry Contest Rick Parise A march of tulips Showy and rainbow coloured Parade of spring blooms

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/12/2024 3:51:00 PM

vivid imagery in this haiku, i can see the tulips, nice wordplay too...thanks for commenting on my haibun and sharing your story

Connie Pachecho

Date: 12/10/2024 2:30:00 PM

1. A march of tulips: think of rows of tulips marching in cadence with added wordplay(/month/march). 2. The garden participants-showy, rainbow coloured 3. What do I see: A parade of spring blooms 4. Tulip tip(s) off (worplay)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/30/2024 11:26:00 AM

- Beautiful flowering in spring, Connie :) -