Tucumcari

As I ride across the high desert plains
an open, arid scenery whisks by.
The sun is heating up rippled windows
on the railroad train, as it jostles riders
to jiggle, jerk and sway 
to the click, clack of wooden tracks
towards Tucumcari, New Mexico
Gateway To The West. 

Sounds of the Old Wild West 
stir up the imagination 
like the great train robbery
of Black Jack Ketchum in 1897 
near Tucumcari, where he and his bandits 
secretly hid their stash of gold
long before the train whistle 
blew near the station. 

Clickity clack, or could that be horses’ hooves
galloping alongside the old train tracks?
As desert dust kicks up, I envision ghosts of riders
wild west cowboys catching up
with guns out of holsters
shouting, “Stop the train! Get the gold!”

“Next stop, Tucumcari!”calls the conductor
I am shaken out of my daydream and look around.
Humble buildings huddle within the arroyos
people proud of their Southwestern heritage 
for here in the desert you’ll not find a heartier folk
than those who live within this great land
of grit and sizzling sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Legros Kelley Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Laura, congratulations on your winning placement in the 'Railroads, A Historical Glance Back' poetry contest with your awesome poem 'Tucumcari' It is fun how you painted such a vivid old west image, I could almost smell the dust of the galloping horses ridden by wild bandits with their handkerchiefs tied around their faces! This was fun and well written. Thank you for your contribution, and again, congratulations on your winning placement! <3 ~BJ
Leiser Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 8:01 PM
Thank you for taking the time to comment so specifically on my poem, BJ! Thank really enjoyed writing it for your contest! :)
Watt Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Laura, what a wordsmith you are! I love how you weave a historical event with the sights and sounds of the Old West. I feel like I was there on the train, ducking bullets from the Colt '45s. I particularly enjoyed the line 'humble buildings huddle beneath the mountain arroyos'. Congrats on your win, my dear friend. Hugs ~ John
Leiser Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 5:00 PM
Thank you, John, for your kind words and thoughtful comments! I know this poem didn’t focus enough on trains and history, but it’s what came to me…we’ve actually been to Tucumcari, a fascinating small western town! :)
Alex Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 5:59 AM
Beautiful work. Congratulations!
Leiser Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Thank you, Christuraj! :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 3:25 AM
I like the historical story in poetic form. Way to go. Creative work. Sara
Leiser Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 8:06 PM
Thank you, Sara! I’m glad you enjoyed this one! :)
Lawless Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 4:24 PM
I like it, a little history, a little nostalgia. Perhaps you should enter it in the train contest.....
Leiser Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 5:17 PM
I did, John. Glad you liked this one! :)
Parker Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 4:22 PM
Really nice way to give me a history lesson...if it's for the contest...good luck
Leiser Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 5:17 PM
Thanks, Frederic. It is for the contest, and I’ve really been to Tucumcari, as well! Glad you like this one! :)
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