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Tucumcari

As I ride across the high plains desert large gaps of open, arid scenery whisk by burning sun is heating up old rippled windows jostling riders jiggle and jump, jerk and sway to the click, clack, click clack of wooden tracks towards Tucumcari, New Mexico; Gateway To The West. Sounds of the Old Wild West stir up the imagination stories linger, like the great train robbery of Black Jack Ketchum that occurred in 1897 near Tucumcari where he and his bandits secretly hid the stash of gold long before the train whistle blew near the station. Clickity, clack, clickity, clack, or could that be horses’ hooves galloping alongside the old steam engine tracks? As desert dust kicks up, I envision ghosts of riders wild west cowboys catching up, with guns out of holsters shouting, “Stop the train! Get the gold!” “Next stop, Tucumcari!”, calls out the conductor I am shaken out of my daydream and look around I view humble buildings huddling within the arroyos these people are proud of their Southern Pacific heritage for here in the desert you’ll not find a heartier folk than those within this land of grit and sizzling sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 11/17/2021 7:54:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your winning placement in the 'Railroads, A Historical Glance Back' poetry contest with your awesome poem 'Tucumcari' It is fun how you painted such a vivid old west image, I could almost smell the dust of the galloping horses ridden by wild bandits with their handkerchiefs tied around their faces! This was fun and well written. Thank you for your contribution, and again, congratulations on your winning placement! <3 ~BJ
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2021 8:01:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to comment so specifically on my poem, BJ! Thank really enjoyed writing it for your contest! :)
Date: 11/16/2021 9:21:00 AM
Laura, what a wordsmith you are! I love how you weave a historical event with the sights and sounds of the Old West. I feel like I was there on the train, ducking bullets from the Colt '45s. I particularly enjoyed the line 'humble buildings huddle beneath the mountain arroyos'. Congrats on your win, my dear friend. Hugs ~ John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/16/2021 5:00:00 PM
Thank you, John, for your kind words and thoughtful comments! I know this poem didn’t focus enough on trains and history, but it’s what came to me…we’ve actually been to Tucumcari, a fascinating small western town! :)
Date: 11/16/2021 5:59:00 AM
Beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/16/2021 8:54:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj! :)
Date: 11/5/2021 3:25:00 AM
I like the historical story in poetic form. Way to go. Creative work. Sara
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/5/2021 8:06:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! I’m glad you enjoyed this one! :)
Date: 11/4/2021 4:24:00 PM
I like it, a little history, a little nostalgia. Perhaps you should enter it in the train contest.....
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/4/2021 5:17:00 PM
I did, John. Glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 11/4/2021 4:22:00 PM
Really nice way to give me a history lesson...if it's for the contest...good luck
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/4/2021 5:17:00 PM
Thanks, Frederic. It is for the contest, and I’ve really been to Tucumcari, as well! Glad you like this one! :)

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