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Tsunami Soup

The Soup is an Ocean, a sea of writers, wanting to be heard Each Poet is but a molecule, a single element, in the vast compound Each pen is the beginning, of a quake, far below the surface Culminating, larger, larger still, until it is an unrestrained motion With every thought, a ripple, with every stroke of the pen, undulation Until the writer completes their work the tremor becomes a full blown quake, Higher, higher with fevered pitch, the reader feels the movement begin From the very first word, until the water wall of words grow It continues to grow as we read on, when we reach the Apex of the poem We are overcast, with a shadow, the curl of the wave, waiting to envelop us As we reach the conclusion, final words, the very content of the Poets mind Comes crashing to the shore of our minds, the reality, of Tsunami Soup...

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Date: 12/31/2009 5:43:00 PM
Very cool. the essence of what we try to do as poets and writers. when we succeed it is as you say. Tsunami soup! I like your imagery alot. the curl of the wave waiting... dcomes crashing to the shore of our minds..the reality...cool. great job,Richard-Thanks -Robert
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Date: 12/30/2009 7:13:00 PM
Excellent write Taz.. and a perfect scene of poetry magic which each one of us strives to do while creating poetry to share... luv this one a lot... title is unique... great job.. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/30/2009 7:03:00 AM
Great metaphoric use in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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