Tsunami

Morning breaks gray with geese flying.
It’s hard to see in the dim of shadow.
She moves quietly, hard to stop crying.
Maybe the lights come back tomorrow.

Her lips tremor with a will of their own.
She didn’t analyze the reason why.
Everyone, everything here, now gone,
so hard to comprehend, to even try.

The small house they loved was gone,
No one to share it with now, anyway.
Gather a few things, suppress a yawn.
She would be needed much today.

On the train, she recalled the wave.
She could not call for help by phone.
The situation went from bad to grave.
She spent the night in water, alone.

The tsunami had roared in like a beast,
flooding the small basin village quickly.
No building was standing, to say the least.
Most were dead, all the old and sickly. 

She knew she must keep a strong face.
Yet, considering------ could not be rash.
Woman has come now into her place,
but should not wear authority as a sash.

She opened the door to her office suite.
There early, the men looked at the floor.
Please to look for eye to eye to meet,
my husband’s face, never again to adore.

I will try to remain composed, to not cry.
But heart and eyes work as they please.
Tears flow even when we know not why,
and when we know, they flow with ease.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 5:33 PM
Well done Charles. I see why it made it to the finals. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 3:52 PM
Excellent touching skillful write..just like YOU. Congrad's on #2 also! Light & Love
Dufresne Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 7:11 AM
I really don't know how you were able to this Charles. I really don't. It's as if you were an on the scene reporter turned poet and it had affected you also. I am impressed with this empathetic and sympathetic work of yours. Well done my poetry friend
Mehta Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 12:23 AM
Many Congrats Charles on notching up 2nd spot in Debbie's contest. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 10:05 PM
Very powerful poem, Charles. LIke the first one I just read, yours puts us right there as if you really knew all that was going on that fateful day. Congrats on your second place win.
Osita Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 8:59 AM
Congrats on your big place win!
Buckeridge Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 3:20 AM
A great win, very touching piece, congrats x
Mannan Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 8:44 PM
This is oneof the most amazing write I have ever read. I cried with the poem. Many congratulations Sir for this win.
George   Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 8:33 PM
Deeply touching, Charles. Many congrats on your SENSATIONAL WIN. Lainie
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Charles. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Spectacular and first prize to me. Well done, Charles. Well done! You captured it all-every bit of the emotion felt and emotion delayed from shock! Gwendolen
Soulfire Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 8:50 AM
Very touching tribute, Charles. Really captured the loss and strength found within it. Cheers, ~Soulfire~
Soulfire Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 8:51 AM
PS Congrats on your win, Charles!
K. Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 8:05 AM
Super congrats on your 2nd place win with this heartfelt piece, Charles-- you wrote such a compelling piece written from the point of view of a survivor, very touching!
Richards Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 7:32 AM
You brought such a personal heart to this horror....and made us look through a widow's eye, just what it takes to face the world. Excellent, Charles. Congratulations!
Mehta Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of debbie, Charles
Sweetheart Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 5:20 AM
Congrats Charles on your great win in Japan contest.. enjoy luv..
Poet Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Very touching write on tsunami,Charles...
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