Tryst

Titillating touch Rejuvenating a lie. Yesterday’s hover. Sad melancholy kisses Taint a traitorous lover. ©5/19/2021 TANKACROSTIC Poetry Contest

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/8/2021 2:33:00 PM

Good one, John! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/6/2021 2:27:00 PM

Hi John, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2021 12:25:00 PM

Love this one, John. Almost gave it third place. Soupmailing you on something . Oh, and big congrats in my contest.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2021 5:57:00 AM

You present an ugly side of a romantic relationship, John. Amalgamating two forms in one (and with a pinch of rhyme added) is not easy. ~ Best regards // paul

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/19/2021 8:00:00 AM

Good one, John. Your lines so define your title. I liked it!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/19/2021 5:57:00 AM

Brilliant, my friend, John! I am certain it will do very well! Blessings!