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Try To Take a Gander

Try to Take a Gander There ain't nothing I can't write about Even though my poor English is in doubt Correct it yourself can go ahead and do Permanently stick you might need glue. Once poem becomes permanently in place Deserving your attention with no disgrace Why bother and try to read my poem at all Many may appall sung in some shower stall. May be grunts mixed with groans and glitches Whatever, could it still keep you in stitches How many times would you have to laugh? Before poems went down drain taking a bath. How far off must you be from your course? Before start suffering from much remorse Now no longer can laugh yourself to pieces When you hear about prices and increases. Except for Poetry Soup. James Thomas Horn Retired Veteran and Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/7/2016 3:08:00 PM
Hi, James. the last part is sure true. A lot of things NOT making us want to laugh THESE days!!
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Date: 1/8/2016 7:31:00 AM
That is for sure which is why we need to write more humorous and entertaining poems to compensate for all of the political rheteroric. Jim Horn
Date: 1/7/2016 7:50:00 AM
Hi James, individual sections are quite good but for me this one bounces about to much. I think you could turn this one into several different poems.
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Date: 1/7/2016 8:23:00 AM
Excellent idea. Nice hearing back from you Jim

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