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Poetic Form: Quatern

Quatern - Old or New

Sponsor: Joseph May

Entry Submitted: 2025 October 07

Contest Judged: 2025 November 10

Contest Placement: 2nd Place

Truth Remains

Of what ventures the shadow’s ploy for if it were naught that dark hour that steals our breath and steps employ kid ourselves be, fears empower ’Tis distress, a word elders use of what ventures the shadow’s ploy I play naught; black ink stains the hews as it leaves the path drained of joy Let us make our travels less coy and brave ourselves from stillness’ gloom of what ventures the shadow’s ploy yield soulless shades of floating doom Rally of noise around the curb as jitters tinker like a toy as we danced brightly undisturbed of what ventures the shadow’s ploy.
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Miller Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 7:36 AM
Brilliant, very rich and moody, congratulations
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 9:36 AM
Your thoughtful generosity is welcoming, with my thanks.
May Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 4:19 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win in my contest
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 4:33 AM
I am well pleased to have generated your interest of my entry into your contest, Aloha.
Somadas Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 9:43 PM
intellectually and emotionally rich.. of what ventures the shadow’s ploy... Congrats on your placement Hilo..
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 9:50 PM
Quatern’s need a phrase that fits the niche from beginning to end, Aloha.
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