Truth

I fell into a wayside,
I slid into a hole,
I laid in a ditch,
while finding my soul...

I knew I was lost,
I hoped to be found,
you showed me the way,
and put my feet on the ground...

I can never repay you,
I can only hold you tight,
I found my true soul
in a small child's "Goodnight"...

For always and for all time,
I will be ever true to you;
I am your father beyond the end,
beyond my last breath "I love you."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 7:03 PM
george.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
Fallin Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 9:54 PM
Hi George!...OMG!...this is always the delima of love, passion, future???.....We all try "I think" to slow things down while entering into a new relationship!...but somehow the passion always breaks through...and after you go there....its like.."WHAT NOW?".....where do we go from here...It's either going to get more serious...or die out!....Love this piece!..Spoken from the heart!.....SugarbearUSA............:).
Fallin Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 9:48 PM
Hi George!.....Yes..they say there is no love like a "mothers" love..but that is only a cliche".....A "Fathers love" can run just as deep...and this poem shows that love!...Great write here.......bravo!...SugarbearUSA.......:)
Gorelick Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 4:34 PM
Beautiful George..your child will treasure this..congrats on being featured. BG
Coulstock Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 10:04 AM
Hi George-This is so touchingly beautiful and moved me so very much.I love it and can see why it made the feature page.Congratulations. Love June(sylvia)
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week George. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 4:19 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, George
Sweetheart Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 5:35 PM
Congrats George on your featured poem this week on P.S. a special piece to share with us all my friend with luv..
Kysely Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 4:51 PM
Perfect words! Lovely!
Culverhouse Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 6:38 PM
sweet poetry....remember that when they are 15 and sassy....lol
A   Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 3:57 PM
George, the truth about one,, is the only thing honest in life.. I love the emotions you share and offer to your child.. enjoyed,..p.d.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace