Trust Ransacked

  Brazen acts, once under cover of night
    trust now ransacked in broad daylight

  Rape, armed robbery, carjackings
    released from murky lairs on alien wings

  Our beliefs torn asunder, the world upside down
    no foot traffic seen in our part of town

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Date: 12/12/2023 4:30:00 PM
Powerful poem. Truth. Last line shows the result. Have a nice evening :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2023 8:16:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi. ~ Gershon
Date: 12/12/2023 6:09:00 AM
Well stated view of the modern world we live in. This is what the world has become. Excellent. ZIM
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2023 8:17:00 PM
And the world, as is, is not very becoming either!
Date: 12/11/2023 10:02:00 PM
Good Couplet poetry. Full of brazen needless behaviors that we have to live with these days. See you tomorrow. Bill
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2023 8:18:00 PM
In the spirit of today's academia, I believe that these brazen behaviors are 'needs-based.' ~ Still Barfing
Date: 12/11/2023 5:32:00 PM
A brilliant poem, full of wisdom. An emotion-stirring poem, my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2023 8:18:00 PM
Thanks for the enthusiasm on this one, Jerry!
Date: 12/11/2023 5:03:00 PM
Used to, when someone said "catch and release" they were talking about fishing but not so much anymore. Good one, GW!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2023 8:19:00 PM
And I always thought it was hand grenades. Thanks for the fun comment, Daniel.
Date: 12/11/2023 4:18:00 PM
But Gershon, you must remember to "keep it all in context" according to the brainiacs at Harvard and Penn
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2023 8:20:00 PM
Talk about brainiacs. Well, I would, but I never functioned in that context. Nyuk, Nyuk.
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