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Trust Me Baby This Is Love

At dusk, his eyes, dark brown. At once I melt. Again, and yet again, with each sweet kiss. Bright stars! He’s asked to marry me. He knelt, With “trust me baby this is love,” in this Romantic place of time and space. Knees weak. A vestal moon shades blush this pale white dove. His breath abates. He yearns for me to speak. His heart’s been tossed inside the brig of love. I wont to keep facade of logic’s sense, But sky’s alight with truth and sappiness. His “trust me baby this is love” intense. His dusk dark browns lean into happiness. Oh twilight moon! My beau is turning blue! A crimson crescent smile exhales, “I do!” 6/25/2017 Sonnet
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Date: 7/29/2017 2:59:00 PM
Interesting take on the theme Kim. Nice write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2017 9:31:00 PM
Thank you James!
Date: 7/26/2017 12:11:00 PM
Beautiful write, KIm, congratulations on your win... ~*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2017 9:31:00 PM
Thanks Eve!
Date: 7/25/2017 6:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your contest win, Kim...Nicely written sonnet.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2017 9:32:00 PM
Thanks, Lin!
Date: 7/25/2017 5:24:00 PM
Congrats!!! Kim my friend...very well deserved...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2017 9:32:00 PM
Thanks, my friend!
Date: 7/25/2017 5:13:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this. I guess if he was turning blue you could trust it. A talented write. Congratulations
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2017 9:33:00 PM
Thanks Janis!
Date: 6/25/2017 12:40:00 PM
Lovely Kin. Very well written. Should do well. Good luck.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2017 12:47:00 PM
Thank you, Janis!
Date: 6/25/2017 9:38:00 AM
This is a really well written sonnet, Mrs Kim. Perfect meter and rhyme and so full of love. Well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2017 10:07:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel!
Date: 6/25/2017 8:32:00 AM
So romantic Kim...love it
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2017 10:07:00 AM
Thanks, Tim!

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