Trust Me Baby This Is Love

At dusk, his eyes, dark brown. At once I melt. Again, and yet again, with each sweet kiss. Bright stars! He’s asked to marry me. He knelt, With “trust me baby this is love,” in this Romantic place of time and space. Knees weak. A vestal moon shades blush this pale white dove. His breath abates. He yearns for me to speak. His heart’s been tossed inside the brig of love. I wont to keep facade of logic’s sense, But sky’s alight with truth and sappiness. His “trust me baby this is love” intense. His dusk dark browns lean into happiness. Oh twilight moon! My beau is turning blue! A crimson crescent smile exhales, “I do!” 6/25/2017 Sonnet
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Inman Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 2:59 PM
Interesting take on the theme Kim. Nice write.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 9:31 PM
Thank you James!
Roper Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Beautiful write, KIm, congratulations on your win... ~*
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 9:31 PM
Thanks Eve!
Lane Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Congratulations on your contest win, Kim...Nicely written sonnet.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 9:32 PM
Thanks, Lin!
Warrior Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 5:24 PM
Congrats!!! Kim my friend...very well deserved...^WW^
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 9:32 PM
Thanks, my friend!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 5:13 PM
I really enjoyed reading this. I guess if he was turning blue you could trust it. A talented write. Congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 9:33 PM
Thanks Janis!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 12:40 PM
Lovely Kin. Very well written. Should do well. Good luck.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 12:47 PM
Thank you, Janis!
Turner Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 9:38 AM
This is a really well written sonnet, Mrs Kim. Perfect meter and rhyme and so full of love. Well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 10:07 AM
Thanks, Daniel!
Smith Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 8:32 AM
So romantic Kim...love it
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 10:07 AM
Thanks, Tim!
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