Lin Lane Poet Sonnet

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Trust Me Baby, This Is Love

We wrote poetry in the early dawn
I tasted each line through your parted lips
Desire was penned in whispers softly drawn
Your hand inked strokes upon my curvy hips

We kissed while reciting words of passion
Our tongues murmured love sonnets in reply
Ardent verses are always in fashion
Each breath we took,  a pleasurable sigh

I lay beside you, head on your broad chest
Listening to Quatrains in rhythmic beats
The beauty of prose sang within my breast
Romanticism written on silk sheets

Imagery remains inside my heart
Love is a journal of poetic art



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          June 24th 2017
Mystic Rose: Sonnet Contest

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Edward Mccall August 1, 2017 at 9:35 AM I love the way this poem draws the reader in, it's tenderness and sensuality are so well expressed a beautiful write Lin. Lin Lane August 1, 2017 at 10:10 AM You leave the kindest remarks, Edward. Thank you.

James Inman July 29, 2017 at 2:49 PM Sweet, beautiful words you have written Lin. Lin Lane August 1, 2017 at 10:10 AM Thanks a lot, James.

Ra Shagun July 26, 2017 at 12:38 PM Hi., Lin.., Congratulations on your win.. Lin Lane August 1, 2017 at 10:09 AM Thank you, RA

Curtis Johnson July 26, 2017 at 7:21 AM Hi, Lin. Congrats on your placement. Lin Lane July 26, 2017 at 8:12 AM Thank you, Curtis.

Susan Ashley July 25, 2017 at 9:38 PM Hi Lin, intimate and gorgeous! Congratulations! Lin Lane July 26, 2017 at 8:12 AM Thanks ever so much, Susan.

Kim Rodrigues July 25, 2017 at 9:30 PM Love it! Congrats Lin! Lin Lane July 26, 2017 at 8:11 AM Thank you very much, Kim.

Charlie Smith July 25, 2017 at 7:28 PM Terrific sonnet Lin, so glad you won, congratulations... Lin Lane July 26, 2017 at 8:11 AM Thank you most kindly, Charlie.

Winged Warrior July 25, 2017 at 5:21 PM Congrats!!! my lady...why am I not surprised lol...^WW^ Lin Lane July 26, 2017 at 8:11 AM Thanks a lot. WW.

Janis Medders Tobechi July 25, 2017 at 5:19 PM Great sonnet. Well written. Congratulations. Lin Lane July 26, 2017 at 8:10 AM Thank you, Janis.

John Hamilton July 25, 2017 at 11:08 AM This is a wonderful sonnet Lin, congrats on another fine win! Lin Lane July 25, 2017 at 3:10 PM I was honored with this win as much as by your visit and comments, John. Thanks.

Dean Wood July 25, 2017 at 9:58 AM Wow Lin! So beautiful. Congratulations on this well deserved win. - Dean Lin Lane July 25, 2017 at 10:43 AM Thank you most humbly, Dean.

Dale Gregory Cozart July 25, 2017 at 7:58 AM Congrats, again, Lin! You're on a roll! Lin Lane July 25, 2017 at 8:02 AM Thank you very much, Dale...sincerely.

Jan Allison July 25, 2017 at 6:48 AM woohooooooooooooooo many congrats on your top place Lin:-):-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane July 25, 2017 at 8:02 AM Merci, Merci, Jan. Hugs back to you.

Jan Allison June 26, 2017 at 7:04 PM Wow Wow Wow this is a beautifully passionate poem Lin - you have such a wonderful flow to your poems and this is a delightful write:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane June 26, 2017 at 7:18 PM Thank you for the great comments, Jan.

Daniel Turner June 25, 2017 at 8:02 AM Brilliant write, Peaches. Good luck:) Lin Lane June 26, 2017 at 6:58 PM Thanks so very much, Danny.

Frederic Parker June 24, 2017 at 5:45 PM there are those who love, there are those who passionately love, your poem expresses the emotions of one who passionately love...a beautiful poem Lin Lane June 24, 2017 at 6:51 PM I've always respected your poetry and hold your comments in high regard. Thank you, Frederic.

Dale Gregory Cozart June 24, 2017 at 11:54 AM This is a sexy poem, Lin. Very nicely done. Lin Lane June 24, 2017 at 11:57 AM Thank you very much, Dale.

Tim Smith June 24, 2017 at 11:40 AM Wow, that got my dangling modifier's attention...lol...great Lin Jan Allison June 26, 2017 at 7:03 PM Bet its not dangling now Tim lol!!:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane June 24, 2017 at 11:57 AM I think I felt the flush of a blush at your dangling modifier comment, Tim. ;-) Thanks for your attention.