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Trust Me Baby, This Is Love

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We wrote poetry in the early dawn I tasted each line through your parted lips Desire was penned in whispers softly drawn Your hand inked strokes upon my curvy hips We kissed while reciting words of passion Our tongues murmured love sonnets in reply Ardent verses are always in fashion Each breath we took, a pleasurable sigh I lay beside you, head on your broad chest Listening to Quatrains in rhythmic beats The beauty of prose sang within my breast Romanticism written on silk sheets Imagery remains inside my heart Love is a journal of poetic art >>>>>>>>*<<<<<<<<< June 24th 2017 Mystic Rose: Sonnet Contest

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Edward Mccall

Date: 8/1/2017 9:35:00 AM

I love the way this poem draws the reader in, it's tenderness and sensuality are so well expressed a beautiful write Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/1/2017 10:10:00 AM

You leave the kindest remarks, Edward. Thank you.

James Inman

Date: 7/29/2017 2:49:00 PM

Sweet, beautiful words you have written Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/1/2017 10:10:00 AM

Thanks a lot, James.

Ra Shagun

Date: 7/26/2017 12:38:00 PM

Hi., Lin.., Congratulations on your win..

Lin Lane
Date: 8/1/2017 10:09:00 AM

Thank you, RA

Curtis Johnson

Date: 7/26/2017 7:21:00 AM

Hi, Lin. Congrats on your placement.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2017 8:12:00 AM

Thank you, Curtis.

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/25/2017 9:38:00 PM

Hi Lin, intimate and gorgeous! Congratulations!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2017 8:12:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Susan.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/25/2017 9:30:00 PM

Love it! Congrats Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2017 8:11:00 AM

Thank you very much, Kim.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/25/2017 7:28:00 PM

Terrific sonnet Lin, so glad you won, congratulations...

Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2017 8:11:00 AM

Thank you most kindly, Charlie.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/25/2017 5:21:00 PM

Congrats!!! my lady...why am I not surprised lol...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2017 8:11:00 AM

Thanks a lot. WW.

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/25/2017 5:19:00 PM

Great sonnet. Well written. Congratulations.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2017 8:10:00 AM

Thank you, Janis.

John Hamilton

Date: 7/25/2017 11:08:00 AM

This is a wonderful sonnet Lin, congrats on another fine win!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/25/2017 3:10:00 PM

I was honored with this win as much as by your visit and comments, John. Thanks.

Dean Wood

Date: 7/25/2017 9:58:00 AM

Wow Lin! So beautiful. Congratulations on this well deserved win. - Dean

Lin Lane
Date: 7/25/2017 10:43:00 AM

Thank you most humbly, Dean.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 7/25/2017 7:58:00 AM

Congrats, again, Lin! You're on a roll!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/25/2017 8:02:00 AM

Thank you very much, Dale...sincerely.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2017 6:48:00 AM

woohooooooooooooooo many congrats on your top place Lin:-):-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 7/25/2017 8:02:00 AM

Merci, Merci, Jan. Hugs back to you.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/26/2017 7:04:00 PM

Wow Wow Wow this is a beautifully passionate poem Lin - you have such a wonderful flow to your poems and this is a delightful write:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 6/26/2017 7:18:00 PM

Thank you for the great comments, Jan.

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/25/2017 8:02:00 AM

Brilliant write, Peaches. Good luck:)

Lin Lane
Date: 6/26/2017 6:58:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Danny.

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/24/2017 5:45:00 PM

there are those who love, there are those who passionately love, your poem expresses the emotions of one who passionately love...a beautiful poem

Lin Lane
Date: 6/24/2017 6:51:00 PM

I've always respected your poetry and hold your comments in high regard. Thank you, Frederic.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/24/2017 11:54:00 AM

This is a sexy poem, Lin. Very nicely done.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/24/2017 11:57:00 AM

Thank you very much, Dale.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/24/2017 11:40:00 AM

Wow, that got my dangling modifier's attention...lol...great Lin

Jan Allison
Date: 6/26/2017 7:03:00 PM

Bet its not dangling now Tim lol!!:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 6/24/2017 11:57:00 AM

I think I felt the flush of a blush at your dangling modifier comment, Tim. ;-) Thanks for your attention.