Shubham Kamble Poet Rhyme

Trust

If once broken, 
Cannot be mended.
So crestfallen, 
Endless bereavement! 

It is trust,
I talk about. 
Carefully we must, 
Handle it around. 

All aren't worthy,
Likewise the few.
Treat it lowly,
Later you rue.

Faith once lost,
Is gone forever.
Peace stays not,
Agony you savour.

It does haunts,
Like ghosts overhead.
You, it taunts,
Your solitude led.

"Don't trust easy!"
Said experience. 
Sneered augury,
Whence, promised pertinence.

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Lisa Ricci April 25, 2017 at 5:17 PM Hello Shubham. Another fine write by you. Trust is such a big word. At times we make the mistake of trusting first and finding things out later. Well that's me anyway. You have expressed yourself well. Well done with thought for certain. Shubham Kamble April 26, 2017 at 5:02 AM It surely is a big word with big importance in our lives so small, lisa. To trust easily truly defines how big your heart is. And I certainly admire that. To prove worthy of one's trust is what really few people know. :) Thank you for your visit and amazing comment. !! Shubham

Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2017 at 6:27 PM a good message on Trust. It's very nice to find friends we can trust. They are far and few between. Shubham Kamble April 17, 2017 at 9:55 PM Yes, only the trustworthy last long in our life :) Thank you Andrea, for your visit and commeting. I really appreciate it. :) shubham

Constance La France April 16, 2017 at 6:38 PM Shubham, I have been hurt in life so trusting is very difficult. I really like you poem. Shubham Kamble April 17, 2017 at 9:51 PM I can understand. At the end of the day it's we who sob ourselves to sleep just because we put our faith, we trusted, the wrong person. But there will always be a new sunrise. :) BW. Thank you for the visit. shubham

Agnes Krampe April 15, 2017 at 8:14 AM That is very true, Shubham. Shubham Kamble April 15, 2017 at 9:38 AM Yes it is Agnes! :) Thank you for your visit ! shubham

Eileen Manassian April 5, 2017 at 1:18 PM Yes, Shubham...it's one of those things that when broken, it's hard to repair. It takes time. One must prove worthy of it. Thank you for the reminder in this lovely poem. Also, thanks for visiting my POTD. Shubham Kamble April 6, 2017 at 2:24 PM Thanks a lot for the visit and lovely comment Eileen. :) And your poem was just amazing, well deserved POTD :) shubham

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2017 at 8:13 PM Lovely thoughts, Shubham. I can tell that trust is very important to you. Shubham Kamble April 4, 2017 at 12:03 PM Thanks a lot Andrea! Now, is it not important to all of us?

Emile Pinet March 31, 2017 at 10:09 PM Your use of simple words and ideas are easy to digest and strike a common cord of familiarity. Emile. Shubham Kamble April 1, 2017 at 3:03 AM Thank you for your regards, emile.. :) shubham

Joanna Daniel March 31, 2017 at 11:14 AM Simple rhyming poem that is very beautiful and deep, Shubham:) a 7:) Shubham Kamble March 31, 2017 at 1:49 PM Thank you so much! Your regards mean a lot. :) shubham

Demetrios Trifiatis March 30, 2017 at 7:47 AM A very profound poem dear Shubham with lovely messages! A 7 . Welcome to our poetic family where you are going to find many good people! Shubham Kamble March 31, 2017 at 2:35 AM Thanks a lot! Your visit and such endearing words mean a lot to me. Thank you!