Trust

If once broken, Cannot be mended. So crestfallen, Endless bereavement! It is trust, I talk about. Carefully we must, Handle it around. All aren't worthy, Likewise the few. Treat it lowly, Later you rue. Faith once lost, Is gone forever. Peace stays not, Agony you savour. It does haunts, Like ghosts overhead. You, it taunts, Your solitude led. "Don't trust easy!" Said experience. Sneered augury, Whence, promised pertinence.

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/25/2017 5:17:00 PM

Hello Shubham. Another fine write by you. Trust is such a big word. At times we make the mistake of trusting first and finding things out later. Well that's me anyway. You have expressed yourself well. Well done with thought for certain.

Shubham Kamble
Date: 4/26/2017 5:02:00 AM

It surely is a big word with big importance in our lives so small, lisa. To trust easily truly defines how big your heart is. And I certainly admire that. To prove worthy of one's trust is what really few people know. :) Thank you for your visit and amazing comment. !! Shubham

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2017 6:27:00 PM

a good message on Trust. It's very nice to find friends we can trust. They are far and few between.

Shubham Kamble
Date: 4/17/2017 9:55:00 PM

Yes, only the trustworthy last long in our life :) Thank you Andrea, for your visit and commeting. I really appreciate it. :) shubham

Constance La France

Date: 4/16/2017 6:38:00 PM

Shubham, I have been hurt in life so trusting is very difficult. I really like you poem.

Shubham Kamble
Date: 4/17/2017 9:51:00 PM

I can understand. At the end of the day it's we who sob ourselves to sleep just because we put our faith, we trusted, the wrong person. But there will always be a new sunrise. :) BW. Thank you for the visit. shubham

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/15/2017 8:14:00 AM

That is very true, Shubham.

Shubham Kamble
Date: 4/15/2017 9:38:00 AM

Yes it is Agnes! :) Thank you for your visit ! shubham

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/5/2017 1:18:00 PM

Yes, Shubham...it's one of those things that when broken, it's hard to repair. It takes time. One must prove worthy of it. Thank you for the reminder in this lovely poem. Also, thanks for visiting my POTD.

Shubham Kamble
Date: 4/6/2017 2:24:00 PM

Thanks a lot for the visit and lovely comment Eileen. :) And your poem was just amazing, well deserved POTD :) shubham

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2017 8:13:00 PM

Lovely thoughts, Shubham. I can tell that trust is very important to you.

Shubham Kamble
Date: 4/4/2017 12:03:00 PM

Thanks a lot Andrea! Now, is it not important to all of us?