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Trunks and Hunks

Bronzed hunk on the beach
Trunks falling, the girls screaming
Oh my, man oh man


Written for Katherine Stella


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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2009

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Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/2/2009 5:56:00 PM I hope Katherine finds her "bronzed hunk," James. What a delightful senryu! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Katherine Stella Date: 8/30/2009 8:15:00 AM LOL you painted the perfect dream date for me James lol now where did I place that tanning oil for him lol great job on this one my friend have picture in head now lmao keep em coming and thanks for mention hugs Login to Reply

Autumn Page Date: 8/29/2009 6:43:00 PM that is so interesting. i really like it. it makes me laugh due to the truthfullness. lol Autumn Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 8/29/2009 4:17:00 PM I had to laugh with this Senryu Mr.Fraser ! I can just picture this dramatic sight for the fair maidens on the beach ! Great write Sir ! james Login to Reply

Jo Hayton Date: 8/29/2009 11:11:00 AM Again James this makes me smile, you have a wonderful way with words, thankyou for your continued support of my work, love Jo xx Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/29/2009 8:24:00 AM Oooo la la !!.... Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 8/29/2009 7:41:00 AM Very good piece brother James..well done. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/29/2009 7:37:00 AM Yeah! I like this one. It is very descriptive and interesting. Keep writing. Sara Login to Reply