Trunks and Hunks

Bronzed hunk on the beach Trunks falling, the girls screaming Oh my, man oh man Written for Katherine Stella http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life2.php
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 5:56 PM
I hope Katherine finds her "bronzed hunk," James. What a delightful senryu! Love, Carolyn
Stella Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 8:15 AM
LOL you painted the perfect dream date for me James lol now where did I place that tanning oil for him lol great job on this one my friend have picture in head now lmao keep em coming and thanks for mention hugs
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August 29, 2009 at 6:43 PM
that is so interesting. i really like it. it makes me laugh due to the truthfullness. lol Autumn
Peranteau Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 4:17 PM
I had to laugh with this Senryu Mr.Fraser ! I can just picture this dramatic sight for the fair maidens on the beach ! Great write Sir ! james
Hayton Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 11:11 AM
Again James this makes me smile, you have a wonderful way with words, thankyou for your continued support of my work, love Jo xx
Richards Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 8:24 AM
Oooo la la !!....
Higgins Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 7:41 AM
Very good piece brother James..well done.
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 7:37 AM
Yeah! I like this one. It is very descriptive and interesting. Keep writing. Sara
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