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H Form Hybronnet entry for Constance La France  9/11/24

“He is not a lover who does not love forever.” - Euripides


I savor each tender kiss from your lips
   Your touch stirs great ardor within my heart
      Grateful for time spent when we're together
Our lucent love shines despite an eclipse
   United as one 'til death we must part
      Two hearts are joined without rings to tether

            You are my life, beloved destiny

Eyes aflame with desire, your arms outstretched
   Through joys and hardships, we walk hand in hand
      Great lovers, we are now and forever
Visions of you, in my mind has been etched
   Like footprints, together pressed in beach sand
      Not washed away by tides; no, my love ~ never

            Faithful now, and throughout eternity

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Date: 10/1/2024 6:58:00 AM
Lin, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, beautifully penned, love the image and quote, Constance
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Date: 10/1/2024 7:50:00 AM
Thank you very much, Constance. I'm happy you can see this image.
Date: 9/21/2024 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. I am delighted to see it on the winners' list. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:28:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Sara.
Date: 9/16/2024 9:43:00 PM
I absolutely love this one, Lin and will mark it as a fav. Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 9/16/2024 9:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Seeker. I value your comments.
Date: 9/16/2024 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful/romantic write. This would make a lovely card. Great Picture... Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Date: 9/16/2024 9:51:00 AM
Thank you ever so much, Paula.

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