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H Form Hybronnet entry for Constance La France  9/11/24

“He is not a lover who does not love forever.” - Euripides I savor each tender kiss from your lips Your touch stirs great ardor within my heart Grateful for time spent when we're together Our lucent love shines despite an eclipse United as one 'til death we must part Two hearts are joined without rings to tether You are my life, beloved destiny Eyes aflame with desire, your arms outstretched Through joys and hardships, we walk hand in hand Great lovers, we are now and forever Visions of you, in my mind has been etched Like footprints, together pressed in beach sand Not washed away by tides; no, my love ~ never Faithful now, and throughout eternity

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Date: 10/1/2024 6:58:00 AM
Lin, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, beautifully penned, love the image and quote, Constance
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Date: 10/1/2024 7:50:00 AM
Thank you very much, Constance. I'm happy you can see this image.
Date: 9/21/2024 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. I am delighted to see it on the winners' list. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:28:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Sara.
Date: 9/16/2024 9:43:00 PM
I absolutely love this one, Lin and will mark it as a fav. Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 9/16/2024 9:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Seeker. I value your comments.
Date: 9/16/2024 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful/romantic write. This would make a lovely card. Great Picture... Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Date: 9/16/2024 9:51:00 AM
Thank you ever so much, Paula.
Date: 9/13/2024 1:20:00 AM
Loved the line "Two hearts are joined without rings to tether" and so true. Another beautiful write. Danny
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Date: 9/13/2024 5:52:00 AM
Hi Danny. No ties bind love as tightly as the stirrings within hearts. Thanks for being such an encouraging friend.

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